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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-12 09:54 PM


Ever enlivened, my passions freely boil.
I listened,  shuddered, my soul screamed..
My voice trembled so, my tongue of it’s own.
My outreached hands grasped to touch..

A yearning sigh swept through my ears
as I beheld an image beyond creation.
Into my spirit a melody was formed.
A song of love, pure devotion  escaped my lips.

A tear streamed from my face as I sang.
True feelings felt, expressed.... flowed pure.
Shaking so, clinging to the moment.
Praying that I could recall each word.

You enmeshed me  with your thoughts.
Though I too knew  them,  I listened.
An  eloquence of a dozen angel’s harps
quelling my fears, doubt, caressing my soul.

I  pine of you beneath stars my beloved.
Though you are part of me, I  squirm.
Your presence, so consuming, warms me.
Oh...can I ever relinquish you for a moment.
For the hourglass of my mind drains slowly.

Sing a song with me as my heart does grow.
A song of shared love,  measured desires.
Of potent thoughts entwined each night.

For....this instant ...a symphony of hunger...
awaits you.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-12 09:56 PM


you're boiling?  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Kathleen :)

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-11-12 10:00 PM


Well geee...at my age...could that be possible?

Thanx Kay...I think?

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3 posted 2001-11-12 10:34 PM


I agree with Shallot you are boiling.And in my opinion you may boil at any age.So boil away,Magnus.
Peaches

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4 posted 2001-11-12 10:38 PM


A symphony of hunger...awaits you.

simply....sigh.............

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5 posted 2001-11-12 10:53 PM


OH MAGNUS!
You orchestrate a symphony of sighs from the ladies of PiP!!
AND...You have come to a boil sir!  
Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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6 posted 2001-11-13 09:27 AM


*sigh* musical enchantment to start my day. This sings with a love that flows gently on the heart. BRAVO!!!!Absolutely perfect. I love every word and note.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-11-13 09:33 AM


Magnus,
You write well, I enjoyed the read.

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8 posted 2001-11-13 09:57 AM


Very enjoyable reading to start the day.(or end it for that matter)
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-11-13 06:17 PM


Thanx Peaches...and yes,  even this tired
heart can boil within my mind....even over-
flow if I am not careful....

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10 posted 2001-11-13 06:18 PM


A sigh?  ooooo,  me thinks you must have
enjoyed this....Thanx Whispers...

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11 posted 2001-11-13 06:20 PM


Nancy....oh yes in deedee....this watched
pot does certainly boil....thanx.

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