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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-12 09:05 PM


Through cold night air
This chill wakens me
Mind now so refreshed
Heart warmed under overcoat

Eyes ablaze this night
Nothing cooling my desire
Fire of my life
Waiting there so patiently

End of my trail
Nothing meaning much more
Much more meaning less
World left behind me

Screaming to let go
Not hardly good enough
For this driven man
Striding to his eternity

Oh so very lost
Are those little brains
Grasping at classless ideals
Groping for something unreal

I rush to destiny
A rare beauty unseen
By many mortal eyes
For they are blinded

Caught in a whirlpool
Vision set on pause
Silver gold and green
Only things in sight



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1 posted 2001-11-12 09:26 PM




(big huggssssssss) Oh Robert, I know just how you feel; it seems as when our heart has felt so much things seem much more meaningless, but I know deep down your heart will always smile to all that's beautiful to the world, and love will forever fill your loving heart! (sigh) You will seek eternity and the love it brings, sweet friend, I have faith you will! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-12 11:25 PM


I love the colors.......*grin* but of course you know my favourite is turquoise. This poem is filled with power and determination. Very well done, Sir Robert. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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