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Heart To Heart

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Marge Tindal
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Heart to Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

When a sweet 'I love you'
falls asleep on my cheek
Heart to heart I hear it sigh
in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you
Gently encircling my dreams
with soft rose-scented refrain
You awaken me on first morning sunlight,
coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes
Smiling, I can't help but exhale,
'Morning babe, 'me too' ...


November 10, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 11-12-2001 06:05 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh my...such a good way to live life..with love so tenderly given and received!!  Hugs!
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2 posted 11-12-2001 06:23 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Very nicely done.
Nothing ends or starts a day better than an "I Love You".
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Three words known over the world in many
forms...but with the same meaning...so
treasured by us all...Thanx Marge...well
done...always so...
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4 posted 11-12-2001 06:55 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

all should wake to this, its most lovely Marge....


Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Titia Geertman
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How did you know I always awaken like that   (in my dreams that is  )

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-12-2001).]

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Sooooo lovely, Marge! Everyone should be so lucky!
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What a lovely way to start the day!
And a lovely poem as well.
Thank you for this one!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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Sounds heavenly, Marge - Sweet dreams, m'friend...
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*smiling at you*
Well...thank you for doing as I asked  
I told ya to come back well inspired *teehee*
and you ARE!!!
coffee and sighs...breakfast in bed  
beautiful Margie-girl
me

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Marge Tindal
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Martie~
Oh, sweet sis ... it's a VERY BIG LIKE

INot2B~
I'd sure have to agree with you on that one~

Magnus~
Thank you sooooooo much~

GreenEyes~
I'd vote for it~
Thank you~

Titia~
If it's a dream ... god, don't wake me !
And ... this dream grows roses too~

Denise~
Thank you, my dear friend~

Enchantress~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my little meandering thoughts~

Nan~
'heavenly' ... pretty neat metaphor for sure~

JanetMarie~
You did ... and I sure did~
*smiling gently and A LOT*

*Hugs* to you all~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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oh Marge, your words are ever so beautiful...



cottage
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Hey there stranger  
I always liked to think of you as my adoptive mom in my passions family

Your a beautiful person marge...I read everything I can of yours just so you know

and youll be one of the things im thankfull for this time around  

Marge Tindal
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Cottage~
Ohhhh, I thank you so much~

Kevin~
Awwwww, what a sweet compliment~
Thank you, sweetie~
I care about you and your happiness~
*squeezy hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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"You awaken me on first morning sunlight,
coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes"

Oh Marge .... could there be any more beautiful awakening than this? Thank you for the lovely morning read ... smiling here.  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you
.....

WOW... Marge ...WOW

regards, my friend,
Sudhir
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Kit~
Thanks for letting me know I shared your morning smile~

Sudhir~
*smiling gently* from me to you~
Thank you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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(sigh) Oh Marge, you are soooooooo romantic, this poem too made me sigh! (smiles) I dream ever so much of waking up and looking into the eyes of my dream love and how good it feels to say "Good morning, love" to her! (smiles) Sooooooo lovely! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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well marge, you did it again.  thunderous applause for this exceptional piece.
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Ah, nothing lovelier, you are a fortunate lady!

Corinne
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Ahhhh...
i just heaved a well-contented sigh...
we should all read poems like this every day...
thank you for your work
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And here I sit, exhaling cylindrical sighs after reading this one, Marge. A great write straight from a great big warm heart.
Marge Tindal
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Noah~
Romantic ... who, Moi` ?
Yeppers .. guilty as charged~
Thank you~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you so very much for the sweet reply~

Corinne~
Thank you ... yes, I think I'm kinda of fortunate too~

Kaile~
Ahhhhh, the 'work' was in the coffee~
The rest was sheer pleasure~

MidniteSun~
Thank you ... it's a real pleasure to share with you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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23 posted 11-13-2001 12:55 PM       View Profile for Soaringeagle   Email Soaringeagle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Soaringeagle

NOTHING DOES IT LIKE
"I LOVE YOU"
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
HUGS AGAIN
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Passing those smiles around, I see....
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