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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-12 06:02 PM



Heart to Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

When a sweet 'I love you'
falls asleep on my cheek
Heart to heart I hear it sigh
in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you
Gently encircling my dreams
with soft rose-scented refrain
You awaken me on first morning sunlight,
coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes
Smiling, I can't help but exhale,
'Morning babe, 'me too' ...


November 10, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2001-11-12 06:05 PM


Oh my...such a good way to live life..with love so tenderly given and received!!  Hugs!
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2 posted 2001-11-12 06:23 PM


Very nicely done.
Nothing ends or starts a day better than an "I Love You".

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3 posted 2001-11-12 06:36 PM


Three words known over the world in many
forms...but with the same meaning...so
treasured by us all...Thanx Marge...well
done...always so...

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4 posted 2001-11-12 06:55 PM


all should wake to this, its most lovely Marge....


Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
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Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-11-12 07:14 PM


How did you know I always awaken like that   (in my dreams that is  )

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-12-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-11-12 08:47 PM


Sooooo lovely, Marge! Everyone should be so lucky!
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7 posted 2001-11-12 08:56 PM


What a lovely way to start the day!
And a lovely poem as well.
Thank you for this one!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Nan
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8 posted 2001-11-12 09:00 PM


Sounds heavenly, Marge - Sweet dreams, m'friend...
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9 posted 2001-11-12 09:34 PM


*smiling at you*
Well...thank you for doing as I asked  
I told ya to come back well inspired *teehee*
and you ARE!!!
coffee and sighs...breakfast in bed  
beautiful Margie-girl
me

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-11-12 09:59 PM


Martie~
Oh, sweet sis ... it's a VERY BIG LIKE

INot2B~
I'd sure have to agree with you on that one~

Magnus~
Thank you sooooooo much~

GreenEyes~
I'd vote for it~
Thank you~

Titia~
If it's a dream ... god, don't wake me !
And ... this dream grows roses too~

Denise~
Thank you, my dear friend~

Enchantress~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my little meandering thoughts~

Nan~
'heavenly' ... pretty neat metaphor for sure~

JanetMarie~
You did ... and I sure did~
*smiling gently and A LOT*

*Hugs* to you all~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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11 posted 2001-11-12 10:44 PM


oh Marge, your words are ever so beautiful...



cottage

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12 posted 2001-11-12 11:09 PM


Hey there stranger  
I always liked to think of you as my adoptive mom in my passions family

Your a beautiful person marge...I read everything I can of yours just so you know

and youll be one of the things im thankfull for this time around  


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13 posted 2001-11-13 01:28 AM


Cottage~
Ohhhh, I thank you so much~

Kevin~
Awwwww, what a sweet compliment~
Thank you, sweetie~
I care about you and your happiness~
*squeezy hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-11-13 06:41 AM


"You awaken me on first morning sunlight,
coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes"

Oh Marge .... could there be any more beautiful awakening than this? Thank you for the lovely morning read ... smiling here.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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15 posted 2001-11-13 10:51 AM


in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you
.....

WOW... Marge ...WOW

regards, my friend,
Sudhir

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Kit~
Thanks for letting me know I shared your morning smile~

Sudhir~
*smiling gently* from me to you~
Thank you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2001-11-13 11:36 AM




(sigh) Oh Marge, you are soooooooo romantic, this poem too made me sigh! (smiles) I dream ever so much of waking up and looking into the eyes of my dream love and how good it feels to say "Good morning, love" to her! (smiles) Sooooooo lovely! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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18 posted 2001-11-13 11:39 AM


well marge, you did it again.  thunderous applause for this exceptional piece.
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19 posted 2001-11-13 11:47 AM


Ah, nothing lovelier, you are a fortunate lady!

Corinne

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20 posted 2001-11-13 12:10 PM


Ahhhh...
i just heaved a well-contented sigh...
we should all read poems like this every day...
thank you for your work

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21 posted 2001-11-13 12:18 PM


And here I sit, exhaling cylindrical sighs after reading this one, Marge. A great write straight from a great big warm heart.
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22 posted 2001-11-13 12:35 PM


Noah~
Romantic ... who, Moi` ?
Yeppers .. guilty as charged~
Thank you~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you so very much for the sweet reply~

Corinne~
Thank you ... yes, I think I'm kinda of fortunate too~

Kaile~
Ahhhhh, the 'work' was in the coffee~
The rest was sheer pleasure~

MidniteSun~
Thank you ... it's a real pleasure to share with you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 2001-11-13 12:55 PM


NOTHING DOES IT LIKE
"I LOVE YOU"
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
HUGS AGAIN

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Passing those smiles around, I see....

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25 posted 2001-11-13 01:21 PM


Marge, wouldn't it be great if everyone could experience this every day.  Wonderful!!!  Thanks for the smiles.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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26 posted 2001-11-13 01:58 PM


Marge, Love how so few words speak volumns when you write!
"me too" says it all. This reminds me of the song that says..."just one look, and I knew".

Hugs,
Deb

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27 posted 2001-11-13 03:29 PM


*sigh* oh how wonderful that would be. You gave me a vision that set my heart yearning. Wonderful. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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28 posted 2001-11-13 03:47 PM




WOw.....this is so tenderly lovely.
I simpley loved it and I'd have to qoute all of it to tell you which part I liked it best.

Thank you dearest

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Marge Tindal
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29 posted 2001-11-13 05:30 PM


SoaringEagle~
Thank you my sweet forever friend~
Such easy words to tumble from the heart~

Karilea~
I'm trying~
I just gets easier with practice~

GentleSpirit~
LOL ... Happening for me~
I'd wish it for all~  Thank you~

BloomingRose~
Thank you, sweet lady~
I just love the chance to say 'me too'~  Special~

StarTime~
It IS just wonderful~
Thank you for sharing your yearning~

MyEnchantedMelody~
I thank you soooooooo very much for your sweet reply~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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30 posted 2002-04-18 01:38 PM


coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes

What an incredible way to waken... are there any more of these alarm clocks out there? *G*

I love this tender beauty, Marge... Sorry I missed it first time around. *S*

Marge Tindal
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31 posted 2002-04-23 09:34 PM


SweetSuthernGal~
I think there are a few more ... and no 'snooze alarms'~

You're a doll !
*Hugs*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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