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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-11-12 10:27 AM



another crash, just one more doom
to add upon the daily gloom
I fear impending, negatives
who wants this way, of life to live

the shattered morn, now once again
brings thoughts of loved ones, and of friends
of wishes only wanting near
to harbor happiness instead of fear

I want so much to hold onto
a touch, though small of me and you.
I cannot rest, my mind cries out
why is it like this, a mind in doubt

who knows what's next, what's 'round the bend
I fear the walk, I need to mend
from first things first and not until
can I adjust and  will my will

I'm shutting down the news is grim
awaiting word from him and him
crashing more than just in air
the gloom keeps spreading everywhere

if not a terror in the sky
then what is happening, why oh why
I fear all flights, except on ground
where I control the me inbound



[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-12-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-12 11:16 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) It is devastating, I don't know what can possibly happen next in the midst of this crisis! (wipes tears) I feel my head is going to explode, I feel so nervous and terrible inside. (big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you and everyone, sweet friend! (cries) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

angelswing
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2 posted 2001-11-12 12:10 PM


Lovely poem; God I love the rhyme you've used . Sooooooooo emotional, Loved it .
Thanks L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-11-12 12:20 PM


we just don't know yet do we? I mean the cause behind it...I have the news on here of course, worse time to write poetry...or maybe not....we're all scared...maureen, all of us

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-11-12 12:22 PM


Noah...I am trying each day to get out of this slump I am in, only to see another crisis in the making... hugsss


Tom...as holiday time comes, one hopes for better times...all one can do is pray

thank you...

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-11-12 12:24 PM


Kay, I am not so sure we hear truths anymore anyway.

The people of New York have had enough as have all the victims families and all who care.

thanks
Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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