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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-12 09:16 AM


I cry my tears in the dark
so no one else can see
the pain I'm trying to hide
buried deep inside of me.

The pain that to often comes
when I know things aren't right
this overwhelming feeling
it haunts me through the night.

A painted smile then each morning
upon the new day I embark
but I know the tears will return
as I cry.......alone in the dark.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-11-12 09:19 AM


We have a lot in common Donna....hope things get  better for you

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

wornways
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 204
CA, USA
2 posted 2001-11-12 09:23 AM


dear lord of living
touch donna's life and her heart
dry her weary tears

[This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-12-2001).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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3 posted 2001-11-12 09:30 AM


My heart goes out to you dear one. I pray that your the tears in your eyes and heart are dried soon and replaced by gentle love and understanding. ***hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-11-12 12:00 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Donna, I know exactly how you feel, for I recently have been feeling this way a lot myself; there's some sadness I just can't share because my peers wouldn't understand. (big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to you and pray you can share this sadness with someone and heal and feel new hope and joy for tomorrow! (sigh) Please, e-mail me if you need someone to talk to, I would love to help!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-11-12 02:41 PM


I thank you all.  I will be just fine.  *s*
Your thoughts are indeed appreciated muchly.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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