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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-12 07:05 AM


The Scale

Today I am a butterfly
And flutter high to try my wings
I fly into a colored sky
To search the view of dreamers things

My breakfast is flowers nectar
Blooming in amongst the trees and
If lucky, I find a sector
Of lady butterflies to please

It is a world light and airy
Full of wonder and fantasies
A world of phantoms and fairies
With places full of ecstasy

It is the other side my scale
On the left of the balance pole
It is a place I post my bail
To equalize and rest my soul

A positive for negative
With just enough to let me live

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-11-12 07:34 AM


'A positive for negative
With just enough to let me live'
............
A lesson in these words Seymour

excellent

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-11-12 07:55 AM


If lucky, I find a sector
Of lady butterflies to please

It is a world light and airy
Full of wonder and fantasies
A world of phantoms and fairies
With places full of ecstasy

It is the other side my scale
On the left of the balance pole
It is a place I post my bail
To equalize and rest my soul

A positive for negative
With just enough to let me live
=======================================

me and the ladies await your fly-bys  
*winkiewinkie*



                              



                                  





Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-11-12 08:22 AM



Let me metamorphose, so I might fill your sky
with each and every color, to please your astute eye
a bit of gold, touch of blue, iridescent green
a little bit of butterfly, but never touch Moth Queen...


wornways
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4 posted 2001-11-12 08:29 AM


soft they flutter by
dreamy silken butterfly
silent passing high

Nan
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5 posted 2001-11-12 08:36 AM


A grand monarch you are...


Charisma
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6 posted 2001-11-12 09:05 AM


how beautiful!!!

love it!

Charisma

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-12 09:54 AM


I will join all these other ladies and be one of your butterflies.   Have a great day, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-11-12 11:32 AM


Perfectly dreamy poem.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-11-12 04:07 PM


Watch out for all those lady butterflies...
they are gonna come swarming after you now..

Andrew Scott
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10 posted 2001-11-12 04:26 PM


Not a bad way to pay off your debts.  I always enjoy reading your flights of fancy. Peace.
Corinne
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11 posted 2001-11-12 04:29 PM


How wonderful, to live in the world of butterflies.

And I love the imagery of you being a macho little male butterfly pleasing all the ladies!

You monarch, you!

Cor

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12 posted 2001-11-12 04:56 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Seymour! Your beautiful words will have all the sweet lady butterflies filling your hearts rose in the garden of your inspirations! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Denise
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13 posted 2001-11-12 08:59 PM


I wrote this for you a long time ago. It seemed, again, to be an appropriate response!
(((HUGS)))


On Gossamer

On gossamer your soul soars high
As gentle as a butterfly
Adrift upon the springtime breeze
Wings flutter with such grace and ease.
In meadow fair or hill or glen
You drift aloft and bless again
With ev’ry word from your pen wrought
Those walls it seems have only taught
A little higher, friend, to fly
There is no limit to the sky
To any door you hold the key
To open it poetic’ly
Across the chasm wide you sail
Portraying truth, you never fail
On gossamer fly ever high
As gentle as that butterfly.

12/99

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 11-12-2001).]

Janet Marie
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14 posted 2001-11-12 09:22 PM



seems to me by the line forming ...
that you are and have always been ...
the BIG LUNA around here  *L*
Why even Randy cant keep up  

Denise that poem is PERFECT and lovely.
See how much we ALL love you Stinky  
Now...tell me again how you cant fly??    
*winkiewinkie*

Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2001-11-12 09:28 PM


I love the ending, Seymour.  Wonderful work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Midnitesun
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16 posted 2001-11-12 09:39 PM


"A positive for negative
With just enough to let me live"

What an awesome ending!
You are so well balanced, Seymour. It always shines through in your poetry.


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