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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2001-11-12 03:11 AM








A Gust
(Sonnet)


One weary from her travels came to rest
Upon drawn bed of leaflet's soft cascade
And sojourned there to venture on to nest
Beneath a leaf and twig mixed marmalade.
Though rage of nightfall sought a flurry's scorn,
On brittle auburn hues with endless sweeps,
The golden Luna danced away 'til morn --
But all was vain for one as lost who sleeps.
While twilight drifted forth, tomorrow came
With past awakenings to scourge the view ...
Aspired to look beyond a slumber's shame,
A hush swept wisp began to grow anew.
Like sprouting from a willow's parasol,
A gust, now resurrect, doth meet the Fall.


-Lighthouse Bob



© Copyright 2001 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2001-11-12 09:03 AM


Cool verse Robert.
Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-12 09:08 AM


OH I love this one. What a perfect beginning to my day. I love sonnets and you have given me a wonderful vision. How very unique. Thank you for this early morning smile.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-11-12 09:24 PM


Beautiful sonnet, Bob! Well done!
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-11-12 09:26 PM


Lovely sonnet, Bob.  I have to say, I love the picture.  How fitting!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-11-12 10:21 PM


That was a beautiful sonnet, Bob. Very nicely done. I love autumn.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

peaches73533
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6 posted 2001-11-12 10:25 PM


I'm new to sonnet's, but I enjoyed this very much.Thanks.
Peaches

Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2001-11-13 01:48 PM



Thank you dear poet friends for your kind replies....  I too love a sonet.

-Bob


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8 posted 2001-11-13 04:40 PM



You are a marvel...

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