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Raising The Dead
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Raising The Dead |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Raising The Dead When emptiness has grown and the long night is still you touch my heart of stone thus weakening my will Your warmth trickles my veins my forgotten flesh quakes reviving what remains as my lost soul awakes Our breath becomes one our longing lips kiss what was worse is now done life becomes hidden bliss You, single handedly honor raising the dead releasing me souly from my eternal bed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, this is really good. Someone has a special love potion, and just in time. I really enjoyed reading this. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
waking to living joy blossoming tender warmth depths touched beneath skin |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, yes this sounds like someone with a great ability to instigate love. I like the way you did this Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well written...nice one to ponder and think about... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very clever, very good....love this....  Lauren~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you everyone, your comments are always appreciated. I look forward to them. Sandra - instigate ... , undyingly so !!! <<<<<  >>>>> |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!There is nothing that can hide the romance in this. A kiss to raise the dead. Magnificent. *grin* I do know that a kiss waken the sleeping parts of my heart. BRAVO!!! I love it. I am keeping this one.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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