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0 posted 2001-11-12 03:45 PM


11th hour and slience adorns,
Gentle reminders of the nightmare persues,
What can only imagine the screams born,
To all who took their lifes for new,

11th hour and 5 minutes gone by,
Suddenly darkness fills the room,
The way it was very dark days to try,
But you won our freedom to never endure,

11th hour soon passes,
Back to busy lifes it is,
I wont wait till next year,
To remember what you did.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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1 posted 2001-11-12 04:46 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maria, my heart goes out to you and all the victims affected by the tragedy and their families! (sad sigh) Our heroes that have given us freedom will never be forgotten, as their love will always shine. (wipes tears) So sad but well-written, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-12 08:08 PM


Awww thank u noah I sent it round about the same time last year. And with all the terrorist attacks lately it kinda made me look at it in a different light. That maybe even we would have to fight one day.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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