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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-11 09:30 PM


Roses, gardenias and jasmine
Adorn my beautiful flower beds
It is towards this wonderful fragrance
Where my nose is so easily lead

I'll meander past the tree ferns
And inhale the perfume along the way
I plan to make the most of
This glorious Summer's day

Poppies and petunias
Their brilliant colors are so fine
The foxgloves stetch up so high
As they reach for the warm sunshine

Pansies are my favourite
With burgundy, pink and blue
I'll pick a small bunch of them
And give them especially to you

As you take home this piece of my garden
You're also taking a big part of me
Within each and every flower
Is where you'll find traces of me

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-11-11 09:34 PM


What a lovely, descriptive piece Suetang. Wonderful sentiments and beautiful imagery ... very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2001-11-11 09:35 PM


Very nice,
Thanks for the poetic flowering of words,
but here we are slipping into the time of
Ice and brown leaves.
Glad you reminded us to look to the spring.

Gloom

Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09
Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2001-11-11 09:37 PM


suetang,

what a lovely, vivid
piece!,
roses happen to be
my favourite flower

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2001-11-11 09:37 PM


Oh yes please, send some of those pansies here!! They are such pretty flowers, and your garden is so beautiful. You're so lucky to have summer, as we're going into the cold of winter. But you have just brought some sunshine into my day with this piece. Thank you

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2001-11-11 09:58 PM


I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I could almost smell the sweet fragrance of each flower. Thank you for sharing such a colorfull and perfect part of yourself with me in this wonderful poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-11-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-11-11 10:33 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Sue, I love it! (smiles) Such beauty and grace fills your beautiful words, sweet friend, I love them! You are a sweet pansy to us all always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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