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He Has Style
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He Has Style |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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He Has Style he listens to my silence endures my chatter knows I have no tolerance for unwelcome flatter understands my confusion wipes away my tears brings me fruit instead of flowers gently calms away my fears tells me time is a friend and it’s ok to cry sees me for who I am and looks at me straight in the eye cracks such corny jokes just to see me smile then reaches over to touch my hand mastering happiness and sadness with style "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Does he have an available twin? This sounds like a great friend, one who comforts in heartfelt style. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a wonderful friend you have, Helen!  Kathleen |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Helen, I'm so happy you feel this way, for we all have a special friend deep inside ourselves and up above, as all of us here are your friend! (big hugggsssss) You are so very blessed and loved, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Not only does he have style but I can tell by your words he is a treasure. A wonderful poem filled with the love of a deep and true friend. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Only need one of these to make life worth living. Lucky both. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and, that's all we need isn't it?? wonderful helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sounds like he's a lovely man, and a perfect accompaniment to your life. Beautiful poem to him If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh Helen, this was wonderful!! I have a friend like this and he is truly a treasure. You have indeed been blessed! All writing comes |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, And your poetry has style, Lady. I really enjoyed this and the warm feel and comfort it conveys. Well done! e |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very nice. It is great to have a partner that really understands you. Those of us who have found this person are fortunate, indeed. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
what a wonderful man he is! ~ cottage |
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