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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2001-11-11 02:41 PM



the sunlight streams in
touching the depths of my soul
warming me throughout

~~

my weary heart beats
along with the rhythm of
life's pulsing cadence

~~

I hear your echo
reverberating within
the doors of my heart



All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 11-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-11 02:46 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Jennifer! (smiles) Such perfect senryu to match the beauty of Sunday! (big hugggssssss) I love it! (sigh) Gof Bless You always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-11-11 02:47 PM


you know I love this    

Kathleen
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also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Temptress
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3 posted 2001-11-11 08:06 PM


I don't think I've ever seen you do these. You do wonderfully! What a great new style for you!    

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2001-11-11 08:23 PM


Lone wolves cry at night
But clear eyes of truth burn bright
Warming our cold hearts

Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-11-11 08:47 PM


Well done Jenn.  Enjoyed very much!  ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-11-11 08:48 PM


Oh my ... these are beautiful Lone Wolf. Very descriptive, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-11 09:34 PM


These are beautiful. You hear his echo so he must be getting pretty close. I love them. I can feel them and to me that is what poetry is all about.   **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

cpalmer
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8 posted 2001-11-11 09:41 PM


Well done!  These are simply marvelous! I could feel each one of these...the sunlight warming my heart...the echo...I loved this very much!
Cindi

Tracey
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9 posted 2001-11-11 10:09 PM


Amazes me how much thought can go into so few words. Lovely

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2001-11-11 10:42 PM


Noah: Thank you much, my friend.  It was indeed a lovely Sunday.  May God always bless you also.  

Kathleen: Oh yes, I sure do.  

Temptress: I've done these before, but not often.  They just kind of came to me today.  

Midnitesun:  I have to tell you, I LOVE this reply.  Made me smile.  

Nancy: Thank you!!

Kit: You can speaks volumes with few words.  It always amazes me when that happens.  Thanks much!

Karen: I hope he's getting close!  You never know I guess.  Just some ponderings I had today.  Yes, poetry is all about feelings and conveying them to the reader.  You hit it right on.  **hugs**

Cindi: I'm glad you can feel them also.  I'm more than happy to share!  

Tracey: Me too!  Thank you!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Temptress
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11 posted 2001-11-11 10:44 PM



Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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