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0 posted 2001-11-11 11:02 AM


1967....

War facing us all...all of us who just graduated High School.
Watching the draft numbers, wondering who would be next.
Not wanting to go over there and get your butt shot off
Trying to just grow up normally with a shadow over you.

Didn’t think could go to college, get exemption...no money.
Grades Ok....but self doubt kept me from taking that step.
Jumped on the chance to go Navy....
Life, as I knew it....changed so much....so drastically.

Never forget getting on that bus...waving goodbye.
My mother standing there in tears...My Dad and Brother too.
I sat there, all alone for the first time in my life, crying to myself.
Wondering if I had done the right thing, not knowing.

Arriving in Albuquerque in the dead of night.  Tired, emotions flowing.
Taken into a room where discipline was the rule, so afraid.
Feeling pride when we took the oath of enlistment, scared too.
Herded like cattle, onto a waiting train....A ride which changed my life.

San Diego was our destination...There I was...not even 19 yet...4 months away..
All of the orders, Line UP....Stand at attention....NO talking, the name calling.
It was Midnight when we arrived....So late and so tired...
It was 4 A.M. when we awoke...sleeping in a large dorm...no privacy..
Sharing a bunk for two with a stranger...feeling so alone and scared.

The sound of a person screaming....A 30 gallon metal trash can being
launched through the air, waking suddenly from sleep...Jumping out...
Standing there in just my BVDs.....and my heart pounding so..
Welcome to the Navy.....Proud to have you...
That was when I first started protecting my country...all alone and scared...
26 years later I left....the same tears running down my face...
My mother was not there to welcome me back....by then she was dead..
But I did and still do have my Dad, brother...my wife, children, and many friends.
Many good and bad memories.  Many months away from them.
And I still get a tear when I think back...
For I have my pride....and I am proud to have served and protected all I love.

Happy Veteran’s Day.....

From a Proud Vet...

With a Tear flowing freely down my face...even today..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 11-11-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-11 11:08 AM


Tears flow freely from my eyes as I read these words. So many did so gave so much so that we could live in peace today. So many lives changed forever as they left the comfort of family to give their best in the name of freedom. Though freedom is worth any price still my heart breaks for the high cost of it. Absolutely stunning, dear friend. ***hugs*** thank you for doing your part.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-11 11:16 AM


...and I am proud to know you, sir, and share in this poetry site together. I salute you....
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3 posted 2001-11-11 11:40 AM


Karen....I am very lucky that I never had to
suffer the fear and terror and the death
and dying that so many of our men did in
Vietnam....They are even more a hero than I
ever was....I am proud of what I gave to my
country and our world....For being part of
the deterrent Submarine forces....we helped
assure there would never again be a nuclear
war.  The cost would be too great...and still is...  Thank you dear lady...

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4 posted 2001-11-11 11:42 AM


Balladeer...I am very pleased to be in your
company at this place dear to my heart...
you all have welcomed me and I feel very
much at home...  Thank You

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(sigh) BRAVO, DEAREST FRIEND!!! (big huggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you mean so much to us all as you do to all of America! (smiles) GOD BLESS YOU!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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6 posted 2001-11-11 12:02 PM


Thank you Noah...remember all who have kept
your homeland safe....Don't ever forget
what a luxury you have...paid for by so many
at a high price...life...

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7 posted 2001-11-11 12:33 PM


I am proud to call you 'friend'.
Thank you Magnus....you and all the thousands of other vets...from all the wars.
We shall never forget!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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8 posted 2001-11-11 01:53 PM


Nancy...you are most welcome...and a friend
I will remain....thanx again....

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9 posted 2001-11-11 04:56 PM


Made me think back a little bit to my military days...I served in Europe...have a happy Veterans Day...James
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10 posted 2001-11-11 05:14 PM


Happy Veteran's Day, Magnus. This was a tear jerker for me. I am remembering my step dad today. He passed away this year, and was a Veteran.
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11 posted 2001-11-11 05:22 PM


Magnus,

    Thank you for sharing your memories. It brought a tear to my eye just to read. (I'm getting a box of tissues before I read any more poems.. I'll need them *chuckles*)

    It is so important we don't forget the men and women who protect our country. Who keep our freedom flowing strong.. who give us security.  Thank you.

Hugs,
Tara

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12 posted 2001-11-11 05:36 PM


Magnus; You have my gratitude and salute for your sacrifices on behalf of our country.  Thank you for sharing these feelings with us.  This is a very touching porme.  Wanda
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13 posted 2001-11-11 06:13 PM


Yes.  James...I have to be careful about
the dates....I am giving all of you the
chance to figure out how old I really am...
Aw...what the heck....doesn't matter anyway.
Glad you enjoyed...Thank you for honoring
the vets...


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14 posted 2001-11-11 06:17 PM


Midnitesun...sorry that it brings back sad memories
of your stepfather....I hope you also have
many wonderful ones that you can keep for
all of your years...That is special too.

Thank you very much....I was just one small
piece of a contribution to the entire free
world....but it still feels good...when you
think about it that way...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 11-11-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-11-11 06:20 PM


Tara,  yes it is very important....for there
are a lot of Vietnam vets who still feel
they are forgotten or just plain not wanted
or appreciated....Vietnam was a conflict of
so much turmoil in our own country.  Sad...

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16 posted 2001-11-11 06:24 PM


Wanda...I spent most of my years as part of
the Submarine force...the deterrent forces
that were always out there hiding...keeping
the other side honest...making sure they knew
there were no winners...no one would ever
win a nuclear conflict/war....  Many many
months were spent away....many marital
problems were encountered and most handled
well...but not always so...They were tough
years with all of the separation.

I sometimes felt bitter about what I gave
away....but then one day I thought of the
fact that for that quarter of a century...
I was a part of a navy that made a major
contribution toward keeping all of the
entire free world free...and it remains
today...hopefully for a long time..

I want us to never forget our greatest
generation....the men and women of world war
II....They endured far more than any of us
have in modern times...They are the ones
who need a really really big hug and thank
you...

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17 posted 2001-11-11 06:45 PM


I remember those times, when the young men went off to fight and nothing was ever the same. You write with such feeling and I thank you for serving so that the rest of us could live in freedom.
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Dear man, I am proud to know you. And thank you for the bravery to go into the military during that time of war. I remember the draft days,as well, worrying that a friend would be called up. Very scary times. And now they are back in full swing. How sad that all the effort you and so many others gave, and there cannot be an end to war even yet.
Thank you for what you did,and for what you still do now, sharing yourself with us here.
Happy Veteran's Day
Sanra

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19 posted 2001-11-11 08:02 PM


Sharon....thank you...and again...thank you.
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20 posted 2001-11-11 08:04 PM


Sandra...the struggles I endured are far
surpassed by the satisfaction I feel when
I read thoughts that you...and the other
poets have expressed...They mean a lot..

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21 posted 2001-11-11 10:48 PM


I salute you sir. And all of the other Vets who have served their countries. My grandfather died this year at the ripe old age of 96, he was in the army and was very proud of it. Thank you for sharing your memories today, and thank you for serving your country.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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quote:

That was when I first started protecting my country...all alone and scared...
26 years later I left....the same tears running down my face...
My mother was not there to welcome me back....by then she was dead..
But I did and still do have my Dad, brother...my wife, children, and many friends



and now you have more to thank you for all that you did...

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23 posted 2001-11-12 11:07 AM


Thank you Tracey....This brought out some
very strong emotions as I wrote it...Even
more as I have read all of the thoughts
that each of you have shared and given me.

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24 posted 2001-11-12 11:09 AM


Sunshine...thanx to you and everyone else
who has commented...YES...I have so much more.  And I am pleased...very much so.

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