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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-12 03:23 PM

Weary trek on a path of love
A thousand miles walked
on narrow steps worn smooth
Unsteady in search of warmth.

My life has experienced much.
heartaches, pain, uncertainty
Loneliness, rejection, loss...
Anger and hurtful harsh words.

My eyes have seen tears fall
Have wept drops of heartache
Have seen small sad hurt faces
Shimmering happy faces too

A heart has once been void of love
The void filled with deep despair.
Lingering love guarding eternal
as shielding words are again felt

This thousand miles have taught
this man to love with empathy
Feelings from his deepest part
expressed freely and equally.

Learning to have compassion.
A gentle touch, a caring mind.
A warm embrace, a tender kiss.
Knowing love again will find.

My songs once sad and alone
now sung pure and with joy.
Eyes which once saw hate, lust
now try to see kindness, intimacy

That narrow path has widened
as feet walk steadily and true.
Maturity becomes enlightened
with my ever growing love of you.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-12-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-12 04:24 PM

Wonderfully done!

I like this very much

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2001-11-12 04:28 PM

Lovely, to see the patterns of growth, Magnus.

Corinne

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-12 04:38 PM

(smiles) Love does indeed have our loving hearts mature, and your love will forever grow firm and pure as she will always love you! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are such a loving person and your heart shines with its beauty! (big huggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-11-12 06:32 PM

My pleasure Sue....thanx...velllly much.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-11-12 06:33 PM

Thanx Corinne....I have experienced all of
what I write...tis me, only me.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-12 06:33 PM

Thanx Noah...BTW...the cupid and arrow are
cute..

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-11-12 06:47 PM

Magnus~
So very nicely done~

'This thousand miles have taught
this man to love with empathy
Feelings from his deepest part
expressed freely and equally.'

You write your heart so openly and tenderly~
A really nice pleasure to read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-11-12 06:57 PM

you write passion so beautifully...lovely thoughts.....

Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-11-12 08:01 PM

Enjoyed this...of course I did Magnus!

~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-11-12 08:19 PM

Very nice when love finally finds you..I'm sure it must be.
Ths is perfect.
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-11-12 08:24 PM

Thank you Marge...you too write so well from
your own heart, a joy to read..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-11-12 08:26 PM

Greeneyes....I try...I really do...

Happy to please your eyes..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-11-12 08:31 PM

And of course I know you did Nancy...
Thank you....have a wonderful day
tomorrow.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-11-12 08:32 PM

Yes Sandra...it is nice and I feel in my
heart that you will experience it too.
Keep the faith...don't lose hope...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

15 posted 2001-11-12 11:10 PM

*sigh* a mature understanding of what true love is really meant to be. I am still on my search......

maybe someday he will find me. Very well done, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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