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Tryin To Catch Up ... to Poet DeVine
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Tryin To Catch Up ... to Poet DeVine |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I'm trying to catch up to Poet DeVine, not easy to do with as few posts as mine. I know I've neglected, and haven't been good, about posting replys to your poems like I should. It's just, its not easy to write a short note, not easy to write without tossin a joke. My humors contagious, like a cold or the flu. Don't want ya to think that I'm laughing at you. You write of Autumn, and beautiful trees, I write a reply and I poke and I tease. You write serious, of love's that've gone bad. I write a response bout the fun that I've had. I read all your poems of this please be sure. but can't seem to write one reply that seems pure. My mother once gave me the best of advice, keep ya mouth shut if ya can't say somethin' nice. See, once again.. there my humors been shown. only way I can win... guess I'll answer my own. Geesh this could take a while....giggle Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh.. your hilarious.. you amaze me with your humor. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
The things you say Lucie.. very thought provoking.. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Your wise... (wise-a** that is) and so indepth.. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Not to mention.. beautiful.. giggle |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Giggles.. Don't tell Lucie.. but it doesn't work this way.. hehe It's only good to move up in standing if you do it with honor.. smile... so I guess I'll just have to do it the old fashioned way.. reply boxes.. here I come..  Besides.. Doreen's cornered the market on replying to her own poetry.. hahah lmao.. just playin Doreen.. giggle.. ahem SEE.. geesh I even get myself in trouble in my own replies to myself.... will I never learn..  [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ROFL!!!!!!!!!are you sure you're not me? lol!!!!!!! i can't stop laughing... oh, btw, wonderful writing, excellent, prolific and profound... fabulous!!! you're awesome... i'm saving it in my library... i'll be back to read it many times...  but really... hehe..... the poem was really very well done, honestly but the responses made me realize what a powerfully awesome poet you are and how much you are loved (btw, how do i transfer this same comment to my poem so i don't have to retype it? just wondering....) goodnight, Lucie... and all you poetpeople........ (what? it's not night anymore? it's morning already!! hmmmm... whatever happens to the time??) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO Lucie, I said once that you were the Queen of Jest, and I'll still hand that crown to you! And Doreen is right there behind you...a princess??? HAHAHA This is so funny.   But where is Larry? Went to bed early no doubt. That boy's gettin old and tired, now that he's a Senior and all. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lucie, I'm thinking something stinks here!  But even a pitard can be hilarious! ROTFLMAO You can't be cheating to catch up!(wish I'd thought of that) But I gotta admit, this poem has some of the biggest compliments I've seen on your work. Ya' did it again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank God there is humor and you displayed it well I really enjoyed reading is what I want you to tell Keep those giggles coming Lucie Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lucie, Lucie, Lucie. You should strive to be Sunshine or Marge or Denise they have WAY more posts than I do. This is cute though. Perhaps you should become a Deputy Moderator and THEN you can rack up the replies!! HINT! HINT!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
We should all be our own biggest fan. Loved this, Lucie. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Me? A Deputy Moderator... ha.. now thats funny.. Ron would never allow it.. I don't carry an eraser.. and besides if they say something off color in their poem I would be the one handin em the crayons.. giggle. Rollin on the floor laughin'.... Deputy Moderator... that will carry me through the rest of the day.. runs off humming.. I shot my mouth off... and then I shot the Deputy.. giggle Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lucie, you do the name proud and you know what I mean!Kathleen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Soooooo cute, sweet Lucie! (smiles) Yep, there's a start, but I bet you can really increase your status by becoming a moderator! I just know you would be wonderful at that! (smiles) Very clever and humorous poem, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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