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A Figment of My Fantasy

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Tracey
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0 posted 11-10-2001 09:40 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tracey

If life were like my fantasy
You would be right here with me
I’d know your skin and feel your touch
And you would feel it just as much
I’d know your lips and feel your kiss
I’d fall into its sweet abyss
With kisses soft and tender too
In my dreams I’m wrapped in you
You hold me through my sleeping night
You’re next to me, we’re tucked up tight
I wake with thoughts of you at dawn
And more come as the day goes on
As we talk through day and night
I’m trying hard with all my might
To keep a foot in light of day
But fantasies, they have a way
Of crowding out all other thoughts
Suspending time, a moment caught

Catch me…..share this dance with me
Kiss me….. share this fantasy
Hold my hand and lead me dear
Touch my skin and pull me near
Kiss me…. hold me next to you
Kiss me…. do you want me too?
Breathless, passion in the air
Can you feel it? Take me there
Hold me…. for I cannot breath
Hold me…. is this make-believe?
If this be dream, don’t let me know
If this be real, don’t let me go
I’m lost within my fantasy
You want to get lost here with me?


If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

© Copyright 2001 Tracey Skipp - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-10-2001 09:43 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*grin* I know all about this kind of fantasy. I live there all the time. Keeps me sane.   I love the way you put this poem Tracey. I hope you get a man who can fulfill all your fantasies.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 11-10-2001 09:55 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Love the way you wrote this! Great job!
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3 posted 11-10-2001 09:56 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Tracy~

this was beautiful!!!  
I love your work so much, y'know that?
you write with such love and compassion
regardless if the poem has a melancholy
theme to it or not...just superb  

Take care
Amy  

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

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4 posted 11-10-2001 09:58 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

I have to say, I love this one!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 11-10-2001 10:30 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Im smiling and shaking my head...
remembering how it felt to be this sweetly inspired...
this is a cadence kissed gem of anticpation
enjoy it dear poetess...
the fantasy makes for a wonderful muse...
reality usually takes the words away.
(forgive my moth cynicism)I think Im just plain tired.
well done Tracy..love the format of the second part.
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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6 posted 11-10-2001 10:46 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Now Tracey, this is a delightful fantasy that merits testing in reality. Fantasy is great, it can help make you feel warm on cold lonely nights. But if you can get your hands on the real? Enough said.
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Karen, I see you understand. Nothing wrong with a little fantasy now and then is there? A man to fulfill all my fantasies? Now there’s a tall order, would have to be a helluva fella!!!  

Skyfyre, thank you, I’m so glad you liked this piece.

Amy,  thank you very much for the high praise. I’m flattered indeed to hear this from one who speaks so eloquently of love

LoneWolf, so glad you enjoyed this.

JM, yes, the inspiration here was sweet indeed and I am enjoying it a great deal. Thank you

Kacy, I must say I couldn’t agree more. Nuff said!!!  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 11-11-2001 01:34 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very nice miss Tracey and I do hope its for real!
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9 posted 11-11-2001 02:01 AM       View Profile for Domzi   Email Domzi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Domzi

I smiled when I read this because sometimes our fantasies are wanted as realities. Great write!

Do or die!

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10 posted 11-11-2001 02:08 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I, also, say to self
too good to be true
I'll wake any moment
from this dream of loving you.
If I do, if I wake...
if it was all a fantasy
in dream I'll still hold you tight
hold at bay reality.
For tonight I kiss you softly
within a nameless place
tonight we sleep together
in the dream of this embrace.

'You, you were standin', I was there, two worlds collided...'.  Night, Trace.  Sweet dreams.
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Tracey,
See, now too many people are writing really effective passionate poetry around here!! Holy cow! I can't keep doin' this. Ya' know this one really sends me!  
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12 posted 11-11-2001 07:32 AM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

Tracey...I enjoy fantasties too. This is a very nice one I must say. Great job
alan
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13 posted 11-11-2001 07:54 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I enjoyed the whole of this, the rhyming, the message and the warmth you gave.
*s
~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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14 posted 11-11-2001 09:52 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

very nice Tracey,  I love the way you constructed this, and the feeling it left....


Greeneyes~


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because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-11-2001).]

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15 posted 11-11-2001 10:00 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

yes, so true, and it reads just like it feels....magical and inviting. Thank you for this one  

Kathleen
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"be true to yourself"

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16 posted 11-11-2001 10:03 AM       View Profile for Ven   Email Ven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ven

I think "beautiful" sums it up.  
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(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful! (smiles) I love it! (sigh) I know what this feels like, for every night I lose myself in the lovely fantasies of my dream girl I long to love. (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Tracey, this is wonderful. I was living in the middle of this beautiful fantasy for so  long, but I have been rudely kicked out of it. Shesh.
I love this, its so lyrical and happy.
Sandra
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Walt, fantasy, reality…where does one end and the other begin huh???

Domzi, how true, thank you

Duncan, sigh. I think I like your poem better than mine…but then…I would, wouldn’t I??? Yours gave me sweet dreams and smiles to last the day. Loved the song line too…perfect

Larry, glad this one sent you (as long as it doesn’t send you away from here!!! Lol)

Alan, thank you, and glad I’m not the only one!!

Wynter, so glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it

Greeneyes, thank you for your kind comments

Kay, so glad you found it magical and inviting. This part of my world is for me too.

Ven, thank you, yes, beautiful does sum up this fantasy very well

Noah, ahh, so glad you enjoyed this, for you are the prince of romantic fantasy. Hope yours comes true one day

Sandra, rudely kicked out huh??? Love that way of expressing it!! Yes, this piece is happy, kind of how I feel these days

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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20 posted 02-02-2002 02:27 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

If this be dream, don’t let me know
If this be real, don’t let me go
Tracey
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21 posted 02-02-2002 02:37 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

If this be dream, don’t let me know
If this be real, don’t let me go

I can only echo the sentiment Dunc.
You know ilumddd.

[This message has been edited by Tracey (02-02-2002 05:11 PM).]

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Sometimes, a heart cannot live up to definition.  Though, not yours...I will remember yours.  
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