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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-10 04:14 PM


I'll love you until the day
The sun forgets to shine
I'll love you with all my heart
And hope forever you'll be mine

I'll love you until the mountain peaks
Are void of any snow
I'll love you each and every day
As my love continues to grow

I'll love you until the birds
Can't remember how to sing
How much music to my heart
Does your sweet love always bring

The velvety petals of the rose
Feel like your tender loving touch
I need you within these arms of mine
For I love you oh so much

'tho time can move so quickly
And life passes us by so fast
I know this special love of ours
Through time will forever last

We'v shared so many memories
Together - you and me
How I thrive when you're around me
I'm so very lucky to have you

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2001-11-10 04:19 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet Sue! (sigh) As long as the birds keep singing and the angels continue to sing, your love will forever sing eternally! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-10 06:16 PM


I love reading this...it's so real, so wonderful...

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-10-2001).]

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2001-11-11 01:00 PM


It's a very beautiful thing that you have.. may your love grow forever and ever
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
4 posted 2001-11-11 01:59 PM


Your words...the flow of them express your
love felt more than the words themselves...
Nicely done.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
5 posted 2001-11-12 06:35 AM


You both are timelessly lucky! I love it when you post such love as this!   Hugs! my friend. Hope you always have this in your pen!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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