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A Storm Weathered...Passes By...
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A Storm Weathered...Passes By... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The storm drifting through my mind now calming. Leaves of loneliness ceasing to fall, scattering. A dense fog blowing away from a new day. Sun shining ever so brightly in my heart. I felt the fears as the storm gathered before me. I wiped away tears of rain as they dropped. I clutched at my heart to steady me. This storm, fiercely blowing through my mind. My valley lies within my eyes, most beautiful The birds of love singing harmonious and pure. Green grasses of desire once again growing. For this love I have, this storm it will endure. Could you not see my fears within my soul? Were they not like embers glowing bright? Will you always remember and ever know? This love's flame does burn, burn this night. I leave you now as you rest a peaceful sleep The cloud of despair no longer over my heart. I wish you now to know your love I do keep. I love you dear, my lady...even when apart. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I feel this poem... I feel the same way for a girl I recently was with... but let that be a whole 'nother story~! ;-) Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Scorpion...and you should write about that other story....you may surprise yourself. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I leave you now as you rest a peaceful sleep The cloud of despair no longer over my heart. I wish you now to know your love I do keep. I love you dear, my lady...even when apart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Magnus...as always, an excellent write my friend. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...thank you as usual...you are so gracious to me with your words... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is hauntingly romantic. Kathleen |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I agree with all that was said above and add that your words melt into me so softly. I want a man just like you......*giggling* what are the chances of cloning?????  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Magnus; Another wonderful read, my friend. Wanda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this leaves me in awe.... this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Irish...I never thought of it being hauntingly romantic until I read it again. You are right... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...the clone is to be packaged up on Tuesday for delivery on Wednesday...one large heart put in place of an ordinary one. Also includes one ink pen, with an extra ink cartridge and a spell checker installed. Thanx...enjoyed the comments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
W. as usual...your words ring well on my eyes...thanx. Hope you and Dave are doing well. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
James...thanx...glad you enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whispers Caress....let me check my pockets and see if I can find another one.... Thank you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I will be waiting impatiently for the shipment.  *grin* and I will try to remember to use the spellchecker.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...goood...spellchecker, though an option...is no charge.. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May you always weather every storm. Somehow, though, I feel you have. Love your work, Magnus. Thanks for sharing it with us. All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LW....your feelings are right..so far I have. And some have been awesome storms...helps one grow, even at my age. thanx. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
My valley lies within my eyes, most beautiful The birds of love singing harmonious and pure Green grasses fo desire once again growing For this love I have, the storm will endure Such sweet and endearing words.You've done excellent once again.  Peaches |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Trully romantic. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches...IF I had just a few people in my audience...I would ensure you were one of them....Thank you....happy you enjoyed this. |
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