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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-11-10 03:52 AM


A Love Grown Deep

After the morning sun
takes me away from you
my thoughts begin to clear
as my eyes awake
missing you

I lie in bed for awhile
wishing you were here
slowly feeling your warmth
so far
yet so near

You are and
always well be
a part of me it seems
with me in person
or in my dreams

Through out the day
I find
that you are
always
on my mind

No matter what I see
or what I do
my life
my dreams
will always consist of you

And so
the sun begins
its way down
and the first evening star
is found

I am still
in my own little world
in a daze
I see everything around me
in a smokey haze

When I lower myself
for a good nights sleep
you are still with me
thanks to a love
grown deep

© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-11-10 04:15 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-11-10 09:27 AM


ctowen,

      *smiles* I swear you read my heart with this one Very very much enjoyed.


Hugs,
Tara

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3 posted 2001-11-10 10:09 AM


Nicely done Ct...a beautiful write.
ctowen
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4 posted 2001-11-10 11:03 AM


James, Magnus  -  Thank you for your kind words.

Tara  -  Just a little something I pulled out of my heart.
It is sometimes quite magical.
I am sure yours is full of wonderous things!!
Thank you for commenting.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-11-10 05:13 PM




(sigh) Her dreams will always consist to your loving heart, as will your love always shine for her! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-10 05:54 PM


I love it!!Your pen is so good at expressing your heart.   now this is what love is all about. The one you love just becomes a part of you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-11-10 11:10 PM


*sigh* What a beautiful love poem. A deep love like this makes the world a prettier place.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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