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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2001-11-10 01:21 AM


My apologies to all of you for ripping you off.  I've here used the old ploy of stealing titles for my lines (Open #16, 11.9.1).  I hate to stoop to this but my brain is in neutral, my muse has gone into hiding and if I don't get something written, I'm going to go NUTS!!!
So, with that, here's nothin' - or rather - here are your titles back at ya.
Thanks to all, esp. Dark Angel, James Bowie, Robert William Gruhn, Mistletoe Angel, Temptress, catalinamoon, Decaflame, Lone Wolf, ctowen, dgvarner, The Lady of Shallot, Martie, Corinne, Lady in White, Enchantress, Startime, A Whisper's Caress, Saunni, Interloper, Professor Gloom, passing shadows, Mysteria, Denise, Zinser, Lucie, Duncan, 1slick_lady, Gentle Spirit, James Micheal, HopeS, Marge Tindal, Seymour Tabin, WRBreezin, doreen peri, Sven and Magnus.  Whew, I hope I got everybody!
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If I kissed you
Only in my dreams
Where does love start

If I close my eyes
Halfway up the mountain
Fear me not

There is a place
I'll wait for you in the rain
My dream

Hey Mr. Truckdriver
I'm looking for mountains
Let's roll

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My black & white day
Oh!
Just the beginning

A bouquet
Wildflowers . . .
Open the door to love

My tricky friend
Passing throught a rainbow
Lapping up the pink of day

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Here she comes
Quickly
The girl on the corner

Always a lady
Spinning dancer
Ran into Father Time

Each step generating
One more yesterday
Hang on my love

This time
I'm going out dancing
Like no one has

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I'll never know
Deep within the murky soils
What woman poets want

Believe
An unwritten spell
In the screaming silence

A conversation imagined
About nothing
No distance space or time

Step into my mind
I can still relax
My own design
      
        
        
(c)  11.9.1

© Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-11-10 01:37 AM


smile...

I will love you tenderly until then
words of wow, the puppet show
darkness, baking in the oven
who she is, her soul---I'll never know...


winks, e!!!!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-11-10 11:31 AM


Well done! It's amazing what we can do when we're desparate to break that 'block' .... been there done that!!! I enjoyed this much.  
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-11-10 11:19 PM


This is very clever. I'm amazed that you could put all those titles together and come up with poetry. This is really cool

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-11-11 05:16 PM


Brilliantly done...I wonder what would happen if you were really blocked...fantastic!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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