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Open Poetry #16

Passing Through A Rainbow

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-09 11:21 PM

Passing through a rainbow
Colors caressing my mind
Blues filled with joy
Yellow gold dreams fulfilled

Each one touching body
Promises attached to endings
Choosing one to embrace
Roller coaster paradise ride

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-11-09 11:27 PM

o yuh its a rollercoaster ride but yuh at the end of a rainbow you get a pot of gold at the end of a coaster you got an hour wait til you can get back on again o yuh i think you have inspired a poem thanks!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-11-10 11:36 AM

Ah! I never thought of what it would be like to pass through a rainbow! Excellent tale sir!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-10 04:03 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, you know how I love rainbows! (smiles) This Rainbow Dancer waves to you, sweet brother! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet knight, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-10 07:09 PM

How beautiful is the visions of your words, Sir Robert. I lost myself in the colors and emotions my mind saw.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-11-11 04:32 PM

Wonderful dreamy write. I like the idea of going through and being inside a rainbow.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2001-11-12 12:16 PM

Sir Robert,
I'm slipping fast! That fan thing is really getting close. Fun ride!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

7 posted 2001-11-12 10:22 PM

Robert,
Excellent analogy fo a rainbow.Would love to take a ride like this.
Peaches

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