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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-11-09 04:33 PM


Silent Moments
Are far and few between
Your eyes speak quietly
With sadness they gleam

Unhappiness comes and goes
As read by your facial indication
Silent Moments sometimes are shared
Instead of a verbal conversation...



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1 posted 2001-11-09 04:36 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joanna, you are just too sweet, I love you so so much! (sigh) I too have these feelings every now and then, then talking with you and all my friends, you always cheer em up! (kiss on cheek) I love you! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-09 04:40 PM


It's true ... there are times
when no words, say it best

Nice write

peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-11-09 04:44 PM


We all feel this one time or another.Nice write.
Peaches

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4 posted 2001-11-09 10:24 PM


Sometimes you can say more by saying nothing..very good poem!! Enjoyed it.  
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5 posted 2001-11-09 10:56 PM


Sometimes silent moments are the best.  I like this one, RosePetal.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-11-10 08:51 AM


I've been through those moments...but sometimes it's for the better. Sometimes what your thinking shouldn't be verbalized.

Do or die!

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7 posted 2001-11-10 09:09 AM


Rosepetals,

   Sometimes you say more when you say nothing at all.  I love this  


Hugs,
Tara

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8 posted 2001-11-10 11:18 AM


enjoy
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9 posted 2001-11-10 11:23 AM


The best left unsaid ...
truely shows if any two hearts connect
if both understand the unspoken word.

Great post!!

RosePetal
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10 posted 2001-11-10 10:36 PM


Hey dear poet friends,

Glad to see you liked my latest post. Right now I am on vacation visiting my sister so I havent really had time to write anything in the past few days except for this.
Thank You all for always encouraging me and making me smile!

Love,
RP

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11 posted 2001-11-11 10:12 AM


Silent Moments sometimes are shared
Instead of a verbal conversation...

YES!! I really enjoyed this and its so true, kinda like the song, "you say it better, when you say nothing at all"  cant remember the artist....love this


Greeneyes~


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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-11-2001).]

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