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My Dream
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My Dream |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
My Dream By: Noah Eaton 12/31/00 I close my eyes, I begin to dream Of this girl in whom I’ve been dreaming of every night The future love of mine that I will forever love She is my dream… I see her standing gracefully in a meadow with a lake and the mountains towering behind her A light flurry lifts her long hair into the air as soft as silk, her blue dress shimmers in the sun She stands under a beautiful crabapple tree, swaying in the wind as she glissades across the meadow Singing cheerfully with the robins and the hummingbirds as she hops and wambles with beauty Her long soft hair, which falls down to her waist, is filled with laurels and magnolias She closes her eyes and smiles as the sweet scents of nature fill her soul A grazioso of the sparrows sounds across the prairie, softly filling her ears as she sighs deeply Her light breath of music swims in the sky, the griseous clouds above velate with loves colors She listens to the little fledglings chirping in the tree, she joyfully skips to the tree She watches as the birds flap their wings and jump to try to fly away She softly lets them crawl upon her palms as she holds them with loving care With such joy, the little birds soar off into the sky, flying with grace, as she cheers with delight Smiling with felicity, she begins to sing a sweet song that echoes softly with the breeze A serenade she sings, straight from her heart to me She calls my name as she cries in tears of joy, as her hand is gently over her heart She says she wants to soar through life with me, forever being by my side I open my eyes, I begin to pray That I’ll find this girl of such love someday She is the one I will someday love She is my dream… |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very much enjoyed this Lovely Dream ... reminds me of the dream I found, over twenty years ago  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, This is exceptionally beautiful as all your writngs are.I know that one day you will find your love.I could place myself in this scenery with your words as if I were there.It's like you draw me into your words.You have such a beautiful and romantic heart.don't ever let that change. ((((HUGS))))) Peaches |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes Noah, you will find her. Gosh I wore flowers in my hair a long time ago.. So long. You have a beautiful floating way of writing romance. I love it. Sandra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sweet Noah, this was so very beautiful...you have a heart and soul that is full of light and love...and it comes spilling out on these pages of blue. take care sweet friend, and don't worry you WILL find her...she is just out there waiting for you...in the meantime keep making the ladies here at Passions heart's melt. We adore you sweet one! Take care. amy  "I could kiss you in the rain forever. Turn all of your pain to pleasure Fill up your days with sunlight, make the passion last every night" [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah, outstanding poem as usual. I like your pic, it is very nice to SEE you!! |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
So beautiful are your endearing words of romance my dear brother an friend, loved this feeling poem! Love, Robert |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah,I love this, have you posted this before? It seems familiar to me you write so beautifully, and aren't you a cutie?! Very very much so you are gonna break hearts my dear |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
This is one of my favorites of yours, it flows so nicely in my mind as I read ... Again, a great job Noah!!  |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I knew her once but it was a long time ago when the world was young arthur |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Noah, hope this will be a dream come true! ^.^ It is wonderful to picture this model lover and it'd give us hope. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Noah! I believe I have an artist that can portray your beauty in your poem! She is very talented as you are and this picture popped into my mind. I hope you like it! http://www.enchanted-art.com/rhiannon_large.htm Love and Hugs! Gorgeous Noah! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
This is a lovely poem. What a Romantic you are...I hope you are fortunate enough to find your dream girl! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, How do you manage to get the perfect blend of romance and beauty EVERY time. I love your writing... it's so beautiful. And I agree that is wonderful to see a face with the poetry  Hugs, Tara |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I thoroughly enjoyed this read full of rich images. Do re-read first amd second line...I may be way off base but could they not be combined to not use dream in different tenses so often? You have the soul of a great poet. Red |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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