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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-11-09 03:38 PM


SIGH


'nuff said

© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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1 posted 2001-11-09 03:40 PM


i know the feeling
keep a bit of paper and a pen by you
the best ones comes at the strangest times
arthur

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2 posted 2001-11-09 03:51 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Lucie, I know just how you feel, but you always write so beautifully to us all, and you will find the most beautiful, incredible thoughts coming to you at the most unique times! (smiles) We all love you, sweet Lucie! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-09 03:56 PM


Gosh, this is my favorite    

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"be true to yourself"

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4 posted 2001-11-09 03:56 PM



Work on it...LOL....

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-09 03:58 PM


Well....it needs a little something...but, boy do I know this feeling!!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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6 posted 2001-11-09 04:53 PM


The meter and rhyme are exceptional

Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-11-09 05:05 PM



I don't know...could the H be bigger?  You know...indicating a heavy sigh?

Lucie
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8 posted 2001-11-09 05:16 PM


Exactly what I needed.. the hidden humor of poets.. and I do mean hidden.. giggle

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


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9 posted 2001-11-09 10:31 PM


what a teaser to get my attention!

this cracks me up..thank you

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10 posted 2001-11-09 10:36 PM


ROFLMAO. Perfect...what more can I possibly say????

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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11 posted 2001-11-09 10:36 PM


ROTFLMAO...

    SUBLIME    SENSUAL    CAPTIVATING



Rick
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12 posted 2001-11-09 11:13 PM


Lucie, with one sigh, did all the other words go by?

Rick

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13 posted 2001-11-09 11:16 PM


Rick, i enjoyed your witty reply..
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
14 posted 2001-11-09 11:27 PM


SO REAL (surreal)
Larry C
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15 posted 2001-11-09 11:55 PM


Lucie,
Such inspiration!  

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16 posted 2001-11-10 02:34 AM


Damn...I thought I was brief.  I bow humbly before your perfection in expressing a thousand different thoughts, emotions and memories with one word.  And at the same time saying nothing tangible at all.  
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17 posted 2001-11-10 08:44 AM


I can really read between the line in this Lucie! Very deep! Very drawn. Very....out of breath....LOL! Witty!

Sincerely,
Regina

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Except for what's in the heart.
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