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My Willow Is Dying
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My Willow Is Dying |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My Willow Is Dying Sapped of it's strength it's arms now at it's sides ignored, thirsty, this tree chosen with love, planted with heart has given up, the long summer drought and now the cold autumn air bringing it's golden tone to an end. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a goldenrod is dying... Nice poem yuh |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well done Maureen, I love the way you use words....... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just like a person, it needed attention. You write so very well. Are you sure you're not from Texas? Of course, it could be the proximity thereto. Naw, if proximity were the case you'd be writing like a mississippian  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank You Walt...I really meant to title it this way My Will(ow) Is Dying... Donna thanks..you off today?..*s Hey Tall Texan, If I was one too, you would know me by now....and anyway..I am from PA..what's wrong with that..don't we have good writers there? hmmmmmmm anxious to see that answer since many on here are from there *s thank you hugs all ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh no!!!!! ()((((((((hug0)))))) Kathleen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's just taking a short snooze my dear. Yes,it does need some TLC some days. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Wynter, this poem made me cry, I can feel the despair behind your words. (sad sigh) I know this feeling ever so well, and how it feels the seeds of love will neevr sprout, but I know deep down, the sprouts will caress the tree so dearly and bud fruit and happiness of love to last eternally! (smiles) Your golden heart always shines with such unconditional love and compassion! My heart is with you, sweet friend, and I love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes we need to just let go of everything and get a brand new start...and you will...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen and others..the tree may die, or my will may go, at least for the moment...hugs back..keep up your strength Kay. Midnitesun, I am not so sure...I worked awfully hard at saving this one... only time will tell I guess. *s Noah...you can feel what I feel...and I appreciate that greatly you are so optimistic..must be your age *s hugssssss dear one JamesM...today I am doing just that. You are very smart.and I always appreciate your responses although I may not get to respond to your poems all the time, I do read them and everyone elses. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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