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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-09 06:41 AM


Seemingly Precious

My sweetheart possesses
beautiful dreamy eyes
and soft creamy thighs.

My eyes took a look
and liked what they saw.
My heart took notice
and placed my feelings in awe.

In terms of beauty  
she is sizzling hot
but feminine beauty
is not all that she's got.

Within heavenly progression
of sensual possessions
she tenderly impresses me
with soft sweet caresses.

In response I long to impart
all the love from my heart
perchance I will gain more  
caresses from the woman I love
both beautiful and precious.

JamesLee
November09
2001
Love
You
Jin


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rosepetals25
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1 posted 2001-11-09 06:54 AM


James,

   I love your poetry. You always write from your heart and it shows every time  .  Well done.

Hugs,
Tara

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-09-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-11-09 08:40 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, bless your loving heart and the beautiful romance you share! (sigh) Jin is so very lucky, sweet friend! You're a true romantic, sweet friend! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-11-09 01:28 PM


Thank you so much Tara and Noah for your beautiful response...James
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