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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-11-08 09:09 PM




The First Time
AMK
11/8/01

The first time I see you
I'll know the true meaning of love
Raising my eyes to our Lord
I'll give soft thanks to above

The first time I touch your face
I'll have real peace in my soul
No longer held by chains
My soul at long last complete and whole

The first time I kiss your mouth
Feeling the warmth of your hand
I'll tremble at the beauty of you
Captivated by your command

The first time we make love
I'll feel the Earth move and shake
In the still of the night
We will make sweet love, when in morning we will awake

The first time I lay beside you
I'll feel your heart beat close to mine
The hope in my heart will be strengthened
I'll love you for all time

The first time I love you
Will start the rest of our days
Our souls joined finally
Thus the beginning of our...always

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-08 09:12 PM


Ah, yes, that will be the beginning of forever. Absolutely wonderful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-08 09:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Amy, you are such a romantic, your words always have my heart swooning! (sigh) It's just the beginning of a sweet happiness you'll forever feel! (smiles) Maybe someday someone will love me like that! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-08 09:22 PM


Absolutely lovely and tender write, Amy.  Very well expressed.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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