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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2001-11-08 07:05 PM


We want a lover who can show
true feelings, passion, love that grows
We want a man of intellect
of words and thoughts, where we connect.

We want a lover who will see
both outside and inner beauty
who will appreciate our moods
rather than see them as his doom.

We want a man who smiles at us
and takes our hand, someone to trust
who doesn't turn away with ease
and honestly would like to please.

We want a man of valor true
who will protect, know what to do
and also let us comfort him
be unafraid, touch love again.

And if he comes in package, nice
that's no problem, it would suffice
but on its own, not near enough
Is there a man with all this stuff???

(LOL besides all you passions men)

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-08-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-08 07:06 PM


There is one......I loved this Sandra!!!
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2 posted 2001-11-08 07:12 PM


AMEN!



er, i mean... Ahhhhh Men!  

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3 posted 2001-11-08 07:13 PM


Surely there is Sandra...most assuredly
there is....

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4 posted 2001-11-08 07:13 PM


I would list my wants, but then this would get moved   LOL   This is wonderful  
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5 posted 2001-11-08 07:14 PM


WOW girl, I'm right with you there.

Jee, I guess we've got to take them all apart and just assemble one for you and one for me from the spare parts to get what you just described LOL

Titia

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6 posted 2001-11-08 07:18 PM


I think there are a few gallant men still left who fit that description....now will they please step up?

just kidding about the stepping up..I think you described him perfectly.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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7 posted 2001-11-08 07:25 PM


Sandra, I have no idea who sent you a copy of my resume but....what the heck! I confess....it's me!!!

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8 posted 2001-11-08 07:29 PM


oh Balladeer, we do know that....
I'd like a list of your "special" skills please  

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9 posted 2001-11-08 07:31 PM


Yes a list from all our passionate male poets would be completely appropriate  
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10 posted 2001-11-08 07:33 PM


heeheehee I'm thinking that is a great idea  
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11 posted 2001-11-08 07:38 PM


I've got all that stuff plus I cook and drive a red convertable.  Oh, almost forgot, I'm extrememly humble, also.
You deserve everything you want, don't settle for less!

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12 posted 2001-11-08 07:41 PM


OMG Sandra, are you collecting resumes now? Do you need help reading them? LOL, not at the poem, it's GREAT, but at some of the replies.    
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13 posted 2001-11-08 07:51 PM


King Arthur and his knights died many years ago. Sir Gallahad, I think he's past away too. Womens lib tore the country apart, yet made it a better place in many ways - though a lot of chilvary died in it place.

But we, the gentlemen poets of passions, still live in the world of Camelot, of Shakespearien passion, of tender thought,
gentle touch, and believe all women are ladies, no matter what they do, and we, the gentlemen of Passions adore you, sweet ladies, and would shower you with the fulfillment of your dreams, if it were in our power.  But, alas, tis only with words most of us can show our love.  But love it is - of that you can be sure.

jwesley

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14 posted 2001-11-08 07:53 PM


Sandra!  I think you should email me all the resumes so I can go over them thoroughly for you!
This could take a while.     

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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15 posted 2001-11-08 07:55 PM


You know what I have been learning from the men here at Passions. Those men do exist and we have fine examples of them right here. All we have to do is look for men like the ones we have here. Maybe we could even turn the men we find into poets or send them here to take lessons.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2001-11-08 08:00 PM


I've been thinking for over a year that the rest of the men on the planet need to take lessons from the men HERE.
Waiting on those emailed resumes..tap..tap..
Sandra

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17 posted 2001-11-08 08:01 PM


big smile here, I really enjoyed this and I'll be back to read it again and the replies (resumes) that go along with it.
Nice going, Sandra!!!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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18 posted 2001-11-08 08:06 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Sandra, there are plenty of men like that left in this world, and someday you will be embraced by the man of your dreams, who will love you forever! (sigh) This I wish for you always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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19 posted 2001-11-08 08:44 PM


I need to list my "special" skills?
My, where do I begin?
In duels to capture ladies' hearts
It's known I always win.

My wardrobe is impeccable
No matter what I don
And I can take it off much faster
Than I put it on!

I speak two dozen languages
I learned when I was young
And I can speak to any lass
In almost any tongue.

I've launched a thousand fantasies
From lips that I have kissed.
Girls voted me in high school as
"The Hardest to Resist".

I'm versed in every type of wine..
I've sampled every cheese..
My body is impervious
To every known disease.

Speilberg called to make a film
Of my biography
And plans to do it just as soon
As Mel Gibson becomes free.

When I come by to pick you up
And take you on a date
You'll find my shoes are squeaky clean
And I won't show up late.

I've been known to ring a doorbell
Without using either hand..
Quite a desirable feat, I'm told
(For those who understand.)

So there you have a few of mine.
Although the list is small
If you will give me half a chance
I'll gladly show them all.  

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20 posted 2001-11-08 08:47 PM


ROFL Balladeer..Show away...
Sandra

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21 posted 2001-11-08 08:59 PM


hi Sandra, your terrific poem says it all...
Hugs2uAlwaysSweetie
*~coco~*

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22 posted 2001-11-08 09:04 PM


Hey Sandra!  You have to admit Balladeer is talented being able to ring the doorbell with his nose!! LOL....Nancy.
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23 posted 2001-11-08 09:27 PM



Now, Nancy!!! Is that nice?!?!?!

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24 posted 2001-11-08 09:50 PM


You said this right. I like this very much. I'll trade mine for one one like this.
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I need to install a door bell!! That is one trick I'd enjoy   ROFL
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26 posted 2001-11-08 10:11 PM


please consider my resume submitted  

love this one Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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27 posted 2001-11-08 10:12 PM


All the men here are wonderful, the problem is they are all far away and usually taken  
But I'd like to see that doorbell trick, I must admit...
S

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28 posted 2001-11-08 10:36 PM


That is one bell ringer for sure!!! I believe he needs to post a brochure of maneuverable feats performed by "Balladeer"... I bet he's a big love pretzle!   You are very great in this informative piece! I wish for you so much more! And when he comes along...tell us all about it!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

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Except for what's in the heart.
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29 posted 2001-11-08 11:28 PM


My hair is getting greyer
My chins are more than two
I move a little slower
but most times that will do.

My eyes are bright as ever
but use glasses for to see.
My ears can't hear a pin drop
unless it's close to me.

So the package is somewhat old
and seen its better days
but the heart is pure romantic
and can love in so may ways

The mind is not so empty
that it cannot write a rhyme
of true love and devotion
for and what makes the hearts to bind

All I ask is a little chance
to win your heart in time.
To deny me this with all this truth
because of age would surly be a crime

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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30 posted 2001-11-08 11:33 PM


well i enjoyed this very much dear heart. i think my signature says it all for me. its what I truely am and i die more with each day. yet if I could come to you and sweep you off your feet, in that instant it would surely be love you meet. -Jeremiah Johnson-
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I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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31 posted 2001-11-09 12:18 PM


<----fits the bill on all counts

yes, SEA, those too *ahem*

<---special skills largely revolve around the tongue and *CENSORED*

oh, too bad,

TAKEN!!!

ha, ha, ha......

-Dave, who SO EMINENTLY belongs to Tara.....

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32 posted 2001-11-09 12:20 PM


heheh it would be me oh yuh but you forgot to mention that the good ones are all taken yuh
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33 posted 2001-11-09 12:27 PM


No, she didn't....but i was paying attention....I think.
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34 posted 2001-11-09 12:28 PM


catalinamoon,
  
     This is just toooo great!!! Ummm... even though I'm very much taken.. can I look at the resumes you get too  

Balladeer... I juss luv ya to death! And I have a doorbell... *chuckles* I would give you a lifetime supply of spam if you could "ring my doorbell" *chuckles*

And Dave... *chuckles and grins* umm... I love you...and I'll leave the other comments to myself  

Hugs,
Tara

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35 posted 2001-11-09 01:04 AM


Sandra it's nice to know what you want...James
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36 posted 2001-11-09 01:34 AM


Sandra

Paradise
is
in
the
heart


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37 posted 2001-11-09 01:46 AM


Sandra, don't listen to ct. That's not where paradise is....
Actually, I think he was joking anyway.

This is becoming quite the thread. And I'm in line with all the other gals, we all want a chance to watch the Balladeer validate his resume.

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I think you've covered it all there!!! And judging by the responses to this one, I think everyone agrees with you on this. Now, where does one find someone like this???.....hmmmm

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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LOL I think I'm going to agree with midnitesun juss a little   Paradise is more than than juss in the heart

And Tracey.. I found him.  And I don't share Sorry.. I couldn't resist

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40 posted 2001-11-09 08:23 AM


I feel abused ...
I would think the only place one would allow there heart absolute freedom, without any worries, would be a place called Paradise.
So, if your heart is free in Paradise wouldn't it be safe to say that Paradise is in the heart?        

[This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 11-09-2001).]

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41 posted 2001-11-09 08:47 AM


WOW, this place has been busy after I went to bed.  I have to agree with CT, paradise is in the heart, when the heart is full.
Yuh Walt, I know most of the good ones are taken, Darn it! Dan, there is no way age is relevant with true love, If so I am in big trouble too. And Jeremiah, sweetie, thanks. James, I know you understand
I see all the women here agree with me and as I knew already, the men are all princes.
S

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-09-2001).]

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All the men are princes
so we shouldn't be in a fog
and I know who My Prince is
my ever faithful dog!

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43 posted 2001-11-09 03:59 PM


All the men are princes now
we use to be some frogs
until the lady poets came and
kissed us as we sat on that big old log

*S*  my rhymes are getting worse.  I should have stopped while I was ahead or was I ever ahead....  Sandra you never know what you start in here do you.

Dan

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44 posted 2001-11-09 05:23 PM


Sandra,
       One of your best...although it's hard to choose.....I can relate to every word...Just beautiful....
              Love, Elise

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45 posted 2001-11-09 07:07 PM


Sandra, this is great.  And say, if you find someone who knows how to INSTALL a doorbell, I want him!!
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46 posted 2001-11-10 05:33 AM


Dear madam
I have only recently had the opportunity to read your descriptive poem.
I am available
Arthur

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47 posted 2001-11-10 06:03 AM


There are lots of them - but you know what, I think that they are taken already    This was really cute.

That Balladeer, will you get him,
Modest guy now isn't he?
However there is just one thing,
that is really puzzling me...

If he can ring a doorbell,
not using either of his hands,
He'd be kind of a funny sight,
remember how a tripod stands?

Shoes tell a lot about a man,
my Mother used to say.
But if he can ring the door like this,
Well heck, then I am on my way!   he he

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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48 posted 2001-11-12 12:31 PM


catalinamoon,
I'm with Regina, we want a report! No pressure, but sooner would be better.

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