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The Better Part of Me
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The Better Part of Me |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
The better part of me loves you still, clings to the memories, too distant now, of warmth and support. Knowest I, thou hast tried to console, as I have tried to accept such. But 'tis not enough to keep that hidden part of mineself from emerging. And I now fear the visions that swirl in mine head, that cause mine heart to dance at too fast a pace, when thoughts of doing without rise behind closed eyes. Some say their love is a "match made in heaven". I shall have to wait for mine 'til then... Your Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hope you do not have to wait for your match until then...sometimes it seems that way...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Patience to find and the courage to emerge and seek....Nicely written...thanx. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lady, this is quite lovely, thank you. ~hugs, Nancy~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyOllyne~ Yep ... just gotta LOVE it~  As always .. you write so tenderly~ *Big Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A tender write of longing and patience. I really like this: 'And I now fear the visions that swirl in mine head, that cause mine heart to dance at too fast a pace, when thoughts of doing without rise behind closed eyes' |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I like this side of you extremely well  -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Sir JamesM, I believe, Sir, that I will not find happiness eternally in this world. And am only fooling myself and being fooled into thinking so. And I would rather to mine ownself be true. Lady Ollyne Sir Magnus (I believe), thank thee for thy time and words. Encouragement is wonderful when found among others who have poetic dreams. Lady Who Enchants, Thank thee for thy kind words *s Lady of Heart and Friendship, Time should only allow me the love I seek but never seem to find, nor discovers the heart I have and the truth I hold inside. The world surrounds me in farce and I accept that for now. Tenderness musn't be in at the moment and truth does not knock at my door. I thank thee as always, from the depths of friendship. Lady Ollyne Lady of the Midnitesun I have not the patience I should and the longing grows daily and the fears become greater as they take their place in mine heart. Lady of Tears Sometimes the side you see is not the side yet to be unveiled. thanking all Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... |
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