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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-08 01:15 PM


Two years ago to this date
we laid you in your grave
as tears fell down our face
we, trying to be brave.

Each in turn said goodbye
to a father and friend so true
as now gone, but not forgotten
our hearts will ALWAYS be holding you.

(We love you daddy.....from your daughters...
with love.)


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-08-2001).]

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RSWells
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1 posted 2001-11-08 01:16 PM


God bless you all.
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-11-08 01:19 PM


Thank you RS.....his spirit lives......in us all.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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3 posted 2001-11-08 01:29 PM



Oh...this took me in so easily...and held me warmly...

thank you...

jwesley
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4 posted 2001-11-08 01:34 PM


"We love you, daddy".  

Not taking anything away from this beautiful, thoughtful piece,

"We love you, daddy..." is all powerful.

jwesley

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