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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-11-08 01:13 PM




Quiet is thy plea
Though only one may hear me
Imagination



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Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2001-11-08 01:17 PM



Silence is near by,
Softer than a willow’s sigh,
Sleep is coming soon


Gloom

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2 posted 2001-11-08 01:22 PM


though only one may hear me..

May the right one hear you lady.  *s*
Well written.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

jwesley
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3 posted 2001-11-08 01:37 PM


Though none but you "see" your dream, all know it though your words, my friend.

jwesley

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-11-08 01:43 PM


Silence, nay, is nigh
Unseen with a hearing eye
As it saunters by

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5 posted 2001-11-08 06:09 PM


imagination
solely reserved for children
and we romantics

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-11-08 06:15 PM


Nicely written, Lady, enjoyed reading!

~Tier

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2001-11-08 06:17 PM


It seems as if your whispers are heard far away. Very good, Lady.
wornways
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8 posted 2001-11-08 07:33 PM


Deep in drifting dream
Explores imagination
To the ends of time

Magnus
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9 posted 2001-11-08 07:58 PM


Silence shatters sounds
Stillness captures noice.
Mind hears when ears cannot.

Nice little thinker you give us.

Thank you...

Startime
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10 posted 2001-11-08 08:43 PM


This is a whisper from the heart for only one to hear. Beautiful. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-11-08 09:40 PM


Sometimes the softest voices have the most to say.  Great work, LIW.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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12 posted 2001-11-08 10:26 PM


Very true! Everyone could use a little quiet time every now and then.

RP

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