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Baking in the Oven
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Baking in the Oven |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Baking in the Oven The wind strokes the pussy willow And the cat stalks a mouse. The cow grazes chews its cud And the moon lights the house. The dog lays by the open fire. The flame throws thongs of heat. I sit upon my self made throne And dwell upon my feet. My Queen is still in twilight land Asleep upon her nest. I count my blessings one by one And dream upon the rest. How much of this is really true? How much is in a sigh? How fragile is my ivy tower? How labile is my eye? Enjoy each rosebud of the hour For each bud will make a flower. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... smiling smiling smiling.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sighing here .... sighing .... sighing .... sighing .... and winking   me |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
enjoying enjoying enjoying read like a fairy tale in poem form! I love this!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I sit upon my self made throne And dwell upon my feet.  *L*My Queen is still in twilight land Asleep upon her nest. I count my blessings one by one And dream upon the rest. How much of this is really true? How much is in a sigh? How fragile is my ivy tower? How labile is my eye? Enjoy each rosebud of the hour For each bud will makes a flower. ========================================== in all my sighing I forgot to say........ * * * * * * * * * * (OHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful poem to start the day. Thanks, Seymour. Enjoy your view. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
How much of this is really true? How much is in a sigh? How fragile is my ivy tower? How labile is my eye? I really like the way this is phrased, esp 'how fragile is my ivy tower'... Well, the uncertainty is there, but all you can do is live each day to the fullest, and enjoy each 'rosebud of the hour'??  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour this is realllllllly good.... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling, sighing, and enjoying...........*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you all my lovely friends. Each answer was a candy sweet. And I love candy. *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A connoisseur of delight! Having some biscuits and gravy myself....I like the gravy of life! Your rosebuds...are blooming!! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Smiling Sighing Enjoying Rest my case Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Once again I say thank you to my wonderful friends and send *L* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
superbly done Seymour...lots of visuals of potential poetic words... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Smiling... Sighing... Dreaming... Relaxing... To lovingly beauty... (smiles) Your beautiful words are always so wonderful to read! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write, Seymour. This style suits you very well. All writing comes |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...there is a message in your whimsy..and it is spoken by a prince. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
sighing..... smiling..... relaxing.... enjoying.... loving...... Exceleent job. Peaches |
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