your scattered secrets - tanka (repost )

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Open Poetry #16

your scattered secrets - tanka (repost )

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-11-08 07:49 AM

as i lay sleeping
wet kisses fall from the sky
your scattered secrets
splashing upon my cool skin
melting you into my heart

-dgvarner

(repost from the pub

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~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2001-11-08 07:56 AM

dgvarner,

I just lovvvve tankas! You did this beautifully. This might show how long since I've stopped in to read your writing (I know.. bad me).. But its good to see a face to go along with the poetry

Hugs,
Tara

Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper!

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-11-08 07:59 AM

this is like a soft November rain, or any month for that matter. It's flowing.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-11-08 07:59 AM

DG,
I also like your tankas,Write On my friend, Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-11-08 12:32 PM

TARA..thanks, glad you enjoyed! as for my face...lol my face has been up there..just a diff pic..

LADY..yeah..*sigh* one of those soft warm rains...

thanks for reading!

DEN! my friend..good to see you here mr haiku king!

glad you liked this

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-11-09 10:58 PM

i must have replied to this countless times..

the strange thing is i still like it!

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2001-11-10 12:37 PM

hmmmm, cool skin is nice. Can I send you wet kisses.

This is very nice and a little bit of a tease.

Parker

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-11-10 02:15 PM

(sigh) Soooooooooo beautifully gorgeous! (sigh) Your lovely poetry always dances and sings with romance, I love it!!! (smiles) Here's a kiss from me to you! (kiss on cheek) (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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