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rwood
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0 posted 2001-11-08 06:51 AM



She had no idea
Her first undercover visit
To the Caribbean
Had been a trial
For Edwardo
To toy with her
As a lioness

When she settled in her seat
First Class Air was as close
as she knew she’d ever be
To heaven

She slid her shades on
Her ear piece in
To recline in peace dreams
She Found 9 Inch Nails
Drove away the demons

A slight air bump opened
Her eyes to the guy
Next to her
Peering up her skirt
Moving ever so slightly
As if she were deeply sleeping
He nerved a closer sight
She shoed his chin into his grin
He then asked the stewardess for ice

Upon arrival
She was greeted
By the Funky Monkeys
Of Edwardo’s hire

Time to smooth the pearls
And sway the silk attire
Into an Oil tycoon’s Naughty Daughter

“How yall doin’ Fellas?”
She squealed
Hopping into blackened windows
Smiling with Southern zeal
In perfect timing and swing
That would charm departed snakes

Checking her shimmer
She licked her lips
Sipping champagne
Blurring for the game

Stepping out onto flagstones
In front of a Lion
Spurting water into a giant
Circle fountain

Edwardo was waiting
Through the breezeway
Of magnificent columns
His deceiving gateway
To hell
He delighted in her stride
The most willowy glide
How.. she made him smile

The hollow of empty growling
Rumbling up into his layers
His shell
Of a murderer, a monster
He’d have her by nightfall
But patiently he’d wait

He thought of contacting his sculptor
For his lion... needed a mate.

She tilted the leg in fashion
Of an embracing Southern Hug
Greeting him...spitting on him
with her mind...she declined
instead to Sparkle him in disquise
with cloaked marauding eyes


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Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-11-08 07:02 AM


And no sooner did I speak, but here is episode 5...you must have been reading my mind Regina!!! I love the way this series has me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next episode, curious as to how it will turn out. You are indeed a wonderful story teller Regina

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:28 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Regina, this story is fabulous, YOU'VE GOTTEN ME SO EXCITED FOR THE TURNOUT!!! (smiles) You always emphasize such emotions so wonderfully, and write such wonderful epics. (smiles) More, more! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-11-08 08:30 AM



Ah...the nuance of the mystery tightens...

well done...

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2001-11-08 09:29 AM


I love this series...very well done. Let's have more!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-11-08 03:50 PM


This one has a life of it's own...fabulous...one of my favorites...James
WRBreezin
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6 posted 2001-11-09 05:11 AM



Regina, you've given us greater defining as the series progresses...each detail of character and surroundings lends to more being discovered.

Willie B

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7 posted 2001-11-10 01:57 AM


Regina,
What I tale you weave. Am I falling for a web? This is so good and such fun! lc

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