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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-11-08 06:28 AM



One  Came  Home  for  Christmas
~~~


An  eerie  silence  gripped  the  hour
no  slightest  sound  was  heard
So  many  thousands  crammed  the  boats
and  nary  a  one  was  coward
They  waited  there  in  silence
their  thoughts  were  never  shared
Then  a  crackle  o'er  the  wireless
and  a  thousand  engines  roared
~
The  landing  craft  were  under  way
the  waves  were  pounding  hard
the  foam  sprayed  o'er  the  gunnel
engulfed  them  like  a  shard
The  air  soon  filled  with  mortar  blasts
as  ears  near  burst  their  seams
" Ready  Now "  was  shouted  loud
a  blast  was  mixed  with  screams
~
The  sea  foam  held  a  reddish  tinge
an  odor  bit  the  air
Some  screamed  out  their  battle  cry
while  others  just  a  prayer
The  first  few  ripped  to  pieces
one  step  was  all  they  took
The  rest  climbed  over  what  was  left
without  a  second  look
~
Five  young  friends  with  right  hands  raised
were  going  to  save  the  world
Two  died  before  they  left  the  boat
One  drown  in  the  water
One  listed ... Missing  in  Action
The  last
stepped  on  a  land  mine
Several  months  to  recover
from  the  loss  of  his  leg
~
He  made  it  home  for  Christmas
~
Lest  we  forget ...
~~~

[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 11-08-2001).]

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-11-08 07:07 AM


A poignant offering Rex ... incredible detail you have captured in this piece, which I shall not forget. Thank you for this.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2001-11-08 02:13 PM



Will a simple

Thank you

suffice?

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-08 02:16 PM


Rex!  This piece gave me chills!  The imagery is astounding!  Thank you...Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-08 04:22 PM


Extremely vivid, Rex. Not a scene we could easily forget. Too many never make it home again. Will we ever learn?
Elizabeth
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5 posted 2001-11-08 04:28 PM


Lest we forge, indeed.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-11-08 04:50 PM


No, we never shall, thank you for this gentle reminder  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Martie
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7 posted 2001-11-08 08:47 PM


Rex Allen--an emotive poem of rememberance..thank you for this!
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8 posted 2001-11-11 08:56 AM


bump
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9 posted 2001-11-11 09:05 AM



Thanks, Rex...

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10 posted 2001-11-11 09:56 AM


Oh Rex, this was powerful. The image of those 5 young men will certainly stay with me. Wonderful poem sir.
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11 posted 2001-11-11 11:19 AM


A STUNNING MASTERPIECE OF TRUTH....LET US NEVER FORGET THE HIGH PRICE THAT WAS PAID FOR OUR FREEDOM.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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12 posted 2001-11-12 09:30 PM


We shall not forget, Rex. Thank you for this vivid reminder of the sacrifices made.
Rex Allen McCoy
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13 posted 2001-11-13 01:43 PM


A special thanks to all ... from those who need our Remembrance
~

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