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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597


0 posted 2001-11-08 12:44 PM



bloody red
        
        
        
below the pink
of welcomed lips
flows bloody red
the heat of passion

and through the offered hand
long chilled by one
who failed the test
of her compassion

comes a gasp
with fresh new air
and a flash of light
in unexpected fashion

to this she smiles
a gentleness
that floods away
her pale and ashen

      
        
      
©   11.07.01


© Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-11-08 12:41 PM


ah..one of those simple little abstract numbers..like only E can do...  

enjoyed...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2001-11-08 07:09 PM


Hi there, beautiful poem, been away for a while haven't you, glad to see you back

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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