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How I Love You

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Temptress
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0 posted 11-07-2001 09:45 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

I love you
the poetry in that simple phrase
is magnified when dressed with whispers.
I love you
so can you feel the ache of my heart needing you?
I love you
and there are no greater words that could be inspired within me right now
than these.
~~~whispers~~~
I
~~~kisess~~~
Love
~~~sighs~~~
You
whispers and kisses
and I love you.
Sighs
and I am the flame tickling a nightime wind.
Forgive me not, for I am loving you
and to the perfection of my ability
if I may say so.
I have plumetted into love again.
Will you love me?
Will you stretch out here beside me
where I have
fallen?
Will you endure with me until our lips
are too withered to kiss?
Will our lips ever be too withered?
I think not,
but will you anyway?
Just humor me?
Love me in the wake of tender moments?
I love you.
Will you love me?
I stretch my arms expecting to find you beyond each fingertip.
I bare my heart without shame
while is shivers in anticipation for your warmth.
I love you so much
that I could only whisper it,
and I think you know its more effective
than shouting it.
Just
..............Shhhhhhhhh................
*i love you*

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 11-07-2001 09:49 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

STUNNING!!! MAGNIFICENT!!! I AM SPEECHLESS!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus
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2 posted 11-07-2001 09:51 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Don't stop now...you are on a roll...
very nicely done.
Irish Rose
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3 posted 11-10-2001 02:43 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

very lovely thoughts and feelings in this one, Jenn, very romantic!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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4 posted 11-10-2001 02:48 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



STANDING OVATION!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) The most beautiful way to express love to someone is the most simplest way of all, to say how much you love someone! (sigh) I love it, you are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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5 posted 11-10-2001 08:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I'm just a little speechless here. . . this is superb. . . the flow from a heart that's lost in love. . .

amazing. . . it would seem that this new voice suits you well. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
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6 posted 11-10-2001 09:47 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

This is gorgeous...from the way it's written to the pure love expressed. Absolutely stunning my girl. Stunning.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Domzi
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7 posted 11-11-2001 02:17 AM       View Profile for Domzi   Email Domzi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Domzi

Love poems are my favorite!

Do or die!

rwood
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8 posted 11-11-2001 04:42 PM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

A sensational whisper indeed!!! I loved the way this melted into itself and made such a beautiful statement.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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9 posted 11-11-2001 05:16 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I keep telling you I do...why won't you believe me?
Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you


10 posted 05-06-2002 01:55 PM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

Whisper the words again, that's the only way.

You write of love so well, it's no wonder that I'm wandering around here.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

bsquirrel
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11 posted 07-26-2002 10:39 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Um........ yes...... Uh....

Ah lahked it.

(wow)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Moonlight Romeo
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12 posted 09-10-2002 09:26 AM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

Still wandering dear Lady.  You really need to write more.  How am I supposed to find you?

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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13 posted 01-20-2003 04:30 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

neat write! very passionate
LadySofia
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14 posted 01-27-2003 06:57 PM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

I agree with Passing Shadow's comment, and it takes me back to...well, I won't go there! lol Good lovely poem, full of heartfelt wry and writ.
 
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