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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-11-07 08:13 PM


Hidden From the World

A man of action, like no other
like magic he brings love’s light,
a heart held out with open hand,
spirits not new but bound together,
two souls burning ever bright

He weaves a lover’s spell
bringing tears to dry eyes,
words of power and celebration,
writing from a heart of feeling,
hearing hurt heart’s painful cries

Warm embrace with open arms,
teaching lessons with loving caring,
bringing light to fill dark places,
wiping tears from wet faces,
reaching out to all and sharing

Voice is heard as heart is given,
lover’s voice sets her on fire,
joy and gladness ringing true,
flowing with fire and passion,
sounds that could never tire

A boy, a man, a lover, a friend,
he is all and more as she explores,
a heart hurt hard from past’s pain,
she embraces him with her soul,
take love offered she implores

All this and more stays
Hidden From the World
A man whose heart
Lives for and loves all that’s true

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-11-07 08:15 PM


Karen
Such wonderful words of romance you weave.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-11-07 08:25 PM


Lovely!

~Tier

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
3 posted 2001-11-07 08:27 PM


wow Karen.....you are amazing me...just
cranking the romance out one after another.
this is beautiful...really beautiful.

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
4 posted 2001-11-07 08:30 PM


Karen this is awesome.You are such a romantic and I love it.
Peaches

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-07 08:32 PM


Karen!  You have done it once again.  
Queen of romance....you are!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Robert William Gruhn
Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA
6 posted 2001-11-07 09:13 PM


Lady Karen, this was an absolutely beautifully written romantic piece, as is your beautiful smile sweet damsel, thank you for introducing me to this more than wonderful poetry forum! Your knight and poet! Sir Robert
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