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A Door Never Opened
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A Door Never Opened |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
A door never opened Standing with rusted hinges Quietly waiting Brass knob so cold Will warmed flesh one day grasp it Turn it Finally pull it open Shrieking metal and all |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is a very interesting read....ummm -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Since you are there, you make that decision for us  Well done. I love the presentation! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I pray that the door is opened by warm flesh, my friend. I guess you just need to put out the welcome mat. You have said a lot in this poem and as usual I have probably misread it but nevertheless that is my response. Magnificent writing, Robert. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thought provoking... I like it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) One door will always close, but then, another will open, and one will lead you straight to all the love you can ever dream of and so much more! (smiles) Oh Robert, I am so so happy to see you here! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice metaphor, Robert. Don't forget the WD40. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this dor's opened but bolted, screens up on windows looking in shades pulled tight, ready for dreams nightlight on (loved your writing, robert.... thank you for sharing!!!) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Quite an audible write, this! Well done! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My friend, the heart yearns to be touched again...and time will abide. jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent writing here.... now I am going to go and just sit and think about this for a bit, okay?  ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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