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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-11-07 03:46 PM

Hey Mr. Truck Driver….

Now just because I was
decked out
in fabric of today
over youth
of yesteryear’s yearnings

was it
only my wanting imagination
allowing
possibilities that you, the
truck driver, stayed
just behind my right
car door

as we crept through
morning’s heyday

while my black
skirt
inched mid-high
just like it
did
yesteryear..

so…

was the view still worth it?

or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-07 03:55 PM

HAHAHA. Gave him quite a show, didn't you?
This is great! Such a playful write.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-11-07 03:56 PM

Yep! That's what they do, and what they someday hope to see breaks the ridicule of the rumbling cab.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-11-07 03:58 PM

Deca...I'll bet you look much better now...and your poetry has legs that won't quit!! Hope you gave him a wink!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-11-07 04:00 PM

Probably a little of both

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-11-07 04:34 PM

I'm betting that the view was worth it.

LOL

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-11-07 05:05 PM

All I know is when my girlfriends dress starts to ride up a little high it really gets my attention...fast...some sort of fascination...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-11-07 06:04 PM

(giggles) Oh my, it seems he sure got your attention then! (smiles) It's amazing how such simple things can attract us so deeply! (sigh) Wonderful poem, dearest friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2001-11-09 07:35 AM

Deca - Ohhhhh yeah - I can see that pesky teasing skirt now - We men are just slaves to our eyeballs - lol. The really sensuous aspect of this poem (for an old scalawag such as myself) is the part about you enjoying the stardom. wooo! That is really hot. Just like this poem. ssssssssssssss

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

9 posted 2001-11-09 07:53 AM

Decaflame,

*chuckles* I like this playful nature

Muchly enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2001-11-09 08:29 AM

OH DEAR!!! I KNOW truck drivers really do this in real life, lmao!! One of my best friends is a truck driver, and yep, I have heard all kinds of stories!! You've given a wonderful show with your play on words.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-11-09 03:30 PM

Now that was cute, and did you wink?

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

12 posted 2001-11-09 11:01 PM

LMAO. This reminded me of a few years ago when I used to have to commute the highway to work, and got a few honks from the drivers of a certain trucking company in town. I later found out from one of them that they used to get on the radio and tell each other where I was, and would let the others know. And yes, maybe my skirts were a little short!! Thanks for the memories, I'd forgotten all about that.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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