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. . . Sighs of passion
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. . . Sighs of passion |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
her passionate sighs soft encouragement for him make dust bunnies fly ~*~ inspired by: In Her Bedroom [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Really nice. "The page has expired" was all I could see of the linked poem. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Nah...the page is definitely there.... as is the imagery. Well done to both of you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for the quick fix. I was able to read it, and it is really quite good! Thanks.  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love that her cute poem inspired this one. BRAVO!!!Very well done. *hugs* Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Midnitesun ~ I'm sorry for the goof. After I finally fixed it and you got to see Krista's work, I have read your wonderful comment. Thank you. Deca ~ Thanx loadz Startime ~ {sigh} I just LOVE those smiles and hugs Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another sweet poetic statement. Enjoy them all. Sandra |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I love this, but please feel free to call me Annie haha this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ I'm honored you like my work Annie ~ Okay, Annie, get yore guns Glad you like it 'cuz my heart sure liked your inspire Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Interloper, you always write such beautiful, breathtaking senryus and haikus! (big hugggssssss) I love your beautiful words always! (smiles) Soooooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
using flying dust bunnies to describe a passionate moment.....now THAT'S clever! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ Thank you my friend. Thank you from my heart Balladeer ~ It's OK until you get one, or part of one, in your nostril. That will tend to interrupt the goings on Then how clever is that? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love this one. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one made me smile. Thanks, Interloper. All writing comes |
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