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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-07 01:32 PM


Another day filled with tears
sadness endured through the years.
Dark clouds hanging overhead
the coming morn faced with dread.

Sun seeming quite brighter today
beautiful rainbows lighting the way.
Clouds breaking, skies turned blue
Love prevailing, shared by two.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-11-07 02:01 PM


Liked the suddenness in which the mood changed... contrasting feelings are great... particularly if the second part is such a beauty... prevailing, yes indeed...

Regards,
sudhir

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2 posted 2001-11-07 02:08 PM



Funny how a new day can bring so much change...

well done, GentleSpirit

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-11-07 02:59 PM


YES!
That's what I am talking about! 1derful!
Love DOES prevail sooner or later

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-11-07 05:43 PM




(smiles) Isn't it so lovely how love can make everything so heavenly and harmonic? (smiles) Such beauty always floods your words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-07 09:55 PM


faith of the heart....lovely thoughts Donna~
always~


Lauren~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01


Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-11-07 09:58 PM


May love always prevail.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-11-08 02:47 PM


I've lived long enough in the first verse and want my turn (forever *S*) in the second! *S* I like this very much, GS... well done!
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