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The Other Man In My Life
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The Other Man In My Life |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Again I feel the softness of your touch upon my face. Waking me from sweet gentle sleep to make my spirit race. You speak to me in muted tones where you and I relate. I know the love you hold inside that you can never state. You look at me with gold flecked eyes and smile in your way. And speak to me of all the things that you can never say. You follow me from room to room just trying to be close. You show me that of all you have you cherish me the most. I speak to you cause no ones here, it's you and I alone. I appreciate how comfortable our silences have grown. But tell you that soon you'll have to share me once again. My husband will be home real soon, but I'm all yours 'til then. Silently you lean on me and I see your eyes grow sad. Knowing we will loose the special moments that we've had. My heart will hold a special place for you of that be sure. I tell you that I love you as I stroke your silver fur. With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
OOhhh!! I find this really interesting!!!! Is this man your pet?? Coz u said 'silver fur' at the end... ^.^ i shld've guessed when u said he was following you from room to room...  |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Yes He is my pet.. the other great love of my life... My Russian Blue Tomcat.. He has the softest silkiest silver fur ever. And all the attitude a girl can stand. giggle... He loves me.. but hates to share my time! I've taught him to talk, if you can believe it.. he says MaMa.. smile.. and when he gets outside to fight with the other tomcats the Meows he uses are distinctly different then the others. So much so that he can bring people out of their houses thinking that a child is screaming.. haha, I get well natured complaints from the neighbors all the time.. Guess thats what I get for teachin him to talk. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Love this poem  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, it's a cute kitty-kat! (smiles) Oh Lucie, could you please post a picture of this sweet Russian Blue Tomcat, pretty please? (big hugggssssss) Soooooooo adorable, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
purrfect piece But I shall get even. Bull, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Ha Interloper.... I'm counting on it. With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful!! I was expecting something completely different (and wondering if you knew Wolfman at the end! LOL). |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is sweet and you write beautifully. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* and a purrrrrfect delight he is too. LOL I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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