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0 posted 2001-11-07 10:54 AM



Kelara’s Vision Trek


engrossed by teachings of her guide
She anticipated self’s discovery
vision trek through memories, those that will be
answers to questions,  Kelara’s destiny

Her Epoch, warily measured by  Elder of Clan
fretting  profoundness of  young pupils mind
Waiting, ready for what may come
What she may perchance in one’s self, find

Fearing not this trek, heart filled with quiet certainty
All would be explained , solaced by her bellwether
She followed where lead, by meditative thought
Revelations came, cryptic scene , offering  treasure

~SEA~

part 1 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002581.html

part 2 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002667.html

part 3 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002865.html



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1 posted 2001-11-07 11:04 AM


oooooh an epic through poetry! How enchanting   Thank you, Susan.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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2 posted 2001-11-07 12:58 PM


GR8!.  Can't wait for the next one, gal
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3 posted 2001-11-07 01:04 PM


Susan~Beautiful!  Enjoying these I am!!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-07 02:25 PM



Warily measured, indeed! You are spacing these out so very well, a little here, a little there...leaving us wanting more...

soon...

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5 posted 2001-11-07 04:13 PM


Waiting, ready for what may come
What she may perchance in one’s self, find
============================
She followed where lead, by meditative thought
Revelations came, cryptic scene , offering  treasure
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very cool writing Sea-girlie...reflective..pondering...
exploring the possibilites...and patiently waiting for the answers to be found along the journey.
We willingly follow your pens path on this quest  

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

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6 posted 2001-11-07 04:31 PM


Ah yes, moving right along here.  It only gets better and better, sweet friend. (((hugs)))  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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