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Mon Cherie
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0 posted 11-07-2001 09:02 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mon Cherie

Please
Please tell me
Let me know
That you care for me

Just one little touch
A gentle caress down my back
And I will wear the sweetest smile
On my face, right there

Else I do not know
What to do
Or how to act
When I'm around you

Tell me too
If I mean nothing
My heart will break
My dreams come a-crashing

Love is lost
But life goes on
My mind goes dead
But I'd soon be re-born

No matter what
I must know
Please tell me
I love you so

[This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-07-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 11-07-2001 09:05 AM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* I hope this person tells you what you want to hear. Waiting for love to be shown is so hard to bear. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 11-07-2001 09:12 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

I liked this,
Iím a fan of short lines with lots of meaning,
Itís good you are looking for actions
As well as words to tell you,
Because some people just are able to tell in words
What their hearts feel.

Gloom
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3 posted 11-07-2001 09:49 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Oh Mon, your beautiful heart always shines with such gorgeous love to give, and deserves the most sweetest beautiful love! (sigh) May he answer your call and fill your heart with joy! (smiles) I love you so very much, just as we all do, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Mon Cherie
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4 posted 11-16-2001 10:08 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Startime:   *sigh* as suggested by my later pieces of poem, I didn't hear what I wanted most to know. In fact, I think I've lost him.

Gloom: Thanks! I'm still trying to be one who can express millions with few words. I'm really trying hard.  

Mistletoe Angel: Thanks for the love, care and concern. But now I can only be  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-03-2003 06:33 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes..many times those words we want to hear are not easily said by the other...its almost as if we have to beg for those words...and then they lose there value...James
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