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Mistreater
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Mean mistreater, Your heart’s so cold, You steal her soul, And you leave her there all alone. Mean mistreater, Why do you treat her wrong Why do you carry on, And you leave her a heart of stone. Mean mistreater, You don’t treat her right, You go out at night And you leave there by the phone. Mean mistreater, Why do you keep her there When you don’t really care And leave her just a broken home. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I sometimes wonder if I am MissTreater or the one being mistreated... I can relate to bits and pieces of you, if you know what I mean. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!A powerfull poem that says a lot about the mean mistreater. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts, I would hope that you are not mistreated In any way, Glad you could find pieces to enjoy. Thank you, Startime, Mistreatment oft times is not the physical kind, But any abuser is a low life to me, Pleased you enjoyed. Gloom |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Mean mistreater? Yes, you were, damage you have done, for sure. But my heart can forgive the mean in you. Mean mistreater? Yes, you were cruel, 'oft times you made me play the fool. You know the things I'm saying all are true. Mean mistreater? A name you earned, from my every plea you turned. To make me cry you knew just what to do. Mean mistreater? Everyday! I loved you, but you turned away. The crazy part, I knew you loved me too. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) This poem about broke my heart, it is so so sad! (big hugggssssss) My heart cries out to all these victims of such abuse! (sad sigh) Sooooooo heartwrenching but well-written, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It tells a sad story but true. Nicely presented Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How'd yanno..."Mean Mistreater" is one of my all time favorite songs...and hey PG...you ROCK too! (watch it, you are showing your sweet side again,  ) Hugs, dearheart. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Lucie For the wonderful response in kind. Thank you, Noah, Your words are kind Glad you liked this sad expression. Thank you, Interloper, Pleased you liked Thank you, serenity, Didn’t think you were old enough to know this song, It’s one of my favorites of that era. And where as I might rock, with a “Heart of Stone” I’m not sure how this shows a sweet side, I didn’t even know I had a sweet side, you might be delusional. Even if you are delusional, I like your liking my words. Gloom |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
yeah, you tell 'em. this is no way to treat your girlfriend! |
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