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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-07 02:10 AM



Echoes On The Wind

~*Marge Tindal*~

What is that sound ?
That melodious sound ?
I hear it circling
circling
around~

It sounds just like your laughter
strumming back across the valley
Echoing I love you - loooove yoooou - looove yooou
in heart-strung memories
lifted on guitar-string wings~
Taking me in
spinning me
grinning me
winning my heart all over again~



~ ... me too~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-07 02:19 AM


Marge---I hate it when you make me smile when I don't want to.  lol  I'm glad for your echos though I wish they hadn't resounded so loudly on this end.  
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2 posted 2001-11-07 02:28 AM




Such wonderful lovely echoes...

I'd love to hear them echoing across my valley.....

Thank you sweet ~*Marge*~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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3 posted 2001-11-07 03:10 AM


Duncan~
That's the little Cherokee in me ...
we sneak right up on you with those *smiles*~

MyEnchantedMelody~
I hope you do ... listen closely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-11-07 08:43 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, a good part of my family's heritage is Cherokee Indian too! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful and romantic poem; the most beautiful feeling of love is feeling you're falling in love all over again every time you look into a lovers eyes! (smiles) Sooooooo romantic, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-11-07 08:45 AM



Absolutely lilting!  A great way to begin my Wednesday....

so many treasures...so little time!...

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6 posted 2001-11-07 10:37 AM


Oh Margie gal ... you get me smiling every time, you do - you do! I loved the flow in this wonderful piece, and the fading echos with the disappearing font was perfect! I just loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2001-11-07 11:30 AM


so so nice...

this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart.

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8 posted 2001-11-07 12:48 PM


So very very lovely and uplifting.  
Loved it for sure!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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9 posted 2001-11-07 01:22 PM


Marge--Love makes beautiful feelings and poetry.  Hugs for this one.
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-11-07 01:26 PM


As it should be ... won over and over again

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2001-11-07 01:28 PM


lovely sounds.......the echoes........beautiful Marge!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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12 posted 2001-11-07 01:35 PM


Sweet Marge, your words are echoing right across the ocean dear.  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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13 posted 2001-11-07 01:59 PM


Ah! Margemagic...

regards,
sudhir

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14 posted 2001-11-07 03:13 PM


OH..SO thats where youve been??!!??
I was wondering where you had gotten off two...
youre up in the CLOUDS  
Wonderful uplifting echos here me dear.
When your happy...we're all happy  
love ya lady
me

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

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15 posted 2001-11-07 03:48 PM


Oh I love it when your words echoe what I want to hear. BRAVO!!! I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2001-11-07 04:07 PM


this feeling is a special one, needed it today.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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17 posted 2001-11-07 05:56 PM


Noah~
Thank you~

Karilea~
Thankee, gal~

Kit~
Awww, I'm just glad you liked it~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you, hon~

Enchantress~
Really pleased to know you enjoyed it~

Martie~
*giggles* Yes, 'it' does~

InterLoper~
Thank you, sweet man~

GentleSpirit~
Thanks bunches~

Titia~
I smile just knowing that, my friend~  *Hugs*

Sudhir~
Thank you gentle friend~

JanetMarie~
LOL .. riding out a 'different' hurricane ! !

StarTime~
Echoes come back in sweetest refrain~
Thank you~

LadyOfShallot~
So glad to share a needed thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2001-11-07 09:33 PM


Very lovely, Marge! No surprise in that!  
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19 posted 2001-11-07 09:37 PM


Marge~

Very refreshing from you.....


Lauren~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-07-2001).]

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20 posted 2001-11-07 09:40 PM


I like like like like this....Love has so
much energy here.  Your words say it over
and over...like an echo....

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21 posted 2001-11-08 02:49 AM


nice lingering echos....

~ cottage

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-11-08 06:24 PM


Denise~
I doubt I could open very many of my poems and not find your sweet comments on them~
You are the bestest~

GreenEyes~
Thank you, hon.
It's always good to see you~

Magnus~
I thank you so very much~

Cottage~
It's really nice to know you enjoyed it~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 2001-11-09 01:18 PM


I love to shout in canyons! This is great, a LOVE shout to echo all about. Can we all shout this in harmony together on Remembrance Day November 11????

(Thanks again to 'Loper for sending this poem back into my field of vision)

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