navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Sweet Satin Twirling Embrace
Open Poetry #16
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sweet Satin Twirling Embrace Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Robert William Gruhn
Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-06 11:59 PM


Sweet satin twirling embrace
Gliding into velvet arms
Body burning yet safe
Breathing love's beautiful flower

Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn A.R.R.

© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-11-07 12:04 PM


the flower,
your words,
screened
shining
heart into
empty
nether

....... beautiful writing.... welcome to Passions!!! i'll look forward to reading more....  

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2001-11-07 12:11 PM


Robert--To burn, yet be safe in love..a wonderful place..and lovely poem.  Welcome to Passions.
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2001-11-07 12:44 PM


Welcome. This is such a tender, beautiful post. Thank you for sharing this work of art.
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2001-11-07 12:50 PM


Robert~
Welcome to Passions In Poetry~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-11-07 04:55 AM


Like this Robert...James
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
6 posted 2001-11-07 08:04 AM




(smiles) Once again, your visions and romance shine in your chivalrous words! (big hugggssssss) Someday you will again be embraced by love, just as your eternal love will shine on! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet knight, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
7 posted 2001-11-07 08:27 AM


*sigh* how very beautiful and a perfect first poem, my friend. Welcome to Passions. You will find the poets here are loving and very talented. I am very glad to be able to read your work again. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-11-07 08:30 AM



A beautiful entrance to Passions in Poetry.  Please, check your E-mail for a special Greeting...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2001-11-07 08:33 AM



Wonderful First Post!
Looking forward to more!
    ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
10 posted 2001-11-07 01:38 PM


You'll burn here, but you'll be safe  

Welcome Robert

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

11 posted 2001-11-07 01:43 PM


A very beautiful and tender entrance to passions.  Welcome, your gonna love it here!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
12 posted 2001-11-07 01:50 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
13 posted 2001-11-07 03:42 PM


Hi Robert...welcome to Passions with you
typically great words...

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
14 posted 2001-11-07 04:35 PM


Welcome Poet!! Nice read. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
15 posted 2001-11-07 05:21 PM


Robert
Such a sweet romantic piece you have chosen as your first post and it was very much enjoyed.  Welcome to Passions! Take care..Sue

Suetang

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Sweet Satin Twirling Embrace

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary