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Alan
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0 posted 2001-11-06 10:41 PM



Love Me

Love me with the passion
That you have for breathing
Love me like the stars
Do moonless nights
Let our love carry us afar
Upon endless fantasy flights
Love me as the gentle seas
Love the cool sands
Love me for what you see
Not what you expect from me
Love me the way the moon
Loves the land on a clear night
Love me the way the wind
Loves the clouds in flight
Love me as the bird
Loves to sing
Love me with the warmth
Of the sun loving the day
Love me with a love
Full of color as the sky
At the close of the day
But most of all
Love me totally
As the big sky
Loves the earth

alan

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-06 10:49 PM




(smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) She will love you like a daisy, as sweet as can be, she will love you as a rainbow shining from dreams to reality! (smiles) BRAVO, MY FRIEND!!! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


peaches73533
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2 posted 2001-11-06 10:53 PM


Alan,beautiful words.We all wish to be loved in this way.Now only if we could all give love in this way.Exceptional writing.
Peaches

Tracey
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3 posted 2001-11-06 10:54 PM


That's a whole lotta lovin there!!! These lovin themes look good on you. Some pretty upbeat writing flowing from your pen.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2001-11-06 10:59 PM


  Love is in the air!  

Alan
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5 posted 2001-11-06 11:02 PM


Noah..she is the BLUE in my sky....my green in my grass..the flower in my bed...
thanks for the reply my friend

Alan
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6 posted 2001-11-06 11:05 PM


Peaches..the love is inside each of us..

Tracey..thank you..glad you like me this way..

Midnitesun...thank you little lady...

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