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0 posted 2001-11-06 09:17 PM




Give me a Name

miasmic mistings
left my wanderings listing
longing roads beckoned

m’muse swirled me in
hoary tendrils fingering
glacially reserved

lo the light recedes
leaving only soul beliefs
warming me alone


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-06 09:24 PM




(smiles) That's what I love about dreams and muses; they take us ever so far, and sometimes we can use our imagination and wonder what lies ahead! (big hugggsssss) BRAVO, SWEET KARILEA!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-06 09:39 PM


We are never alone.
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3 posted 2001-11-06 09:43 PM


Sunshine - Just lovely. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2001-11-06 09:48 PM


This is breathtaking, Karilea! Beautiful!
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5 posted 2001-11-06 09:53 PM


Transcendental....Copious... Resplendent.. and many more for you....and simply wonderful.

Sincerely,
Regina

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6 posted 2001-11-06 11:13 PM


This is very nice.  Japanese formats are fun to use sometimes.

Theo

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7 posted 2001-11-06 11:28 PM


ditto rwood   and loved it too!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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8 posted 2001-11-06 11:36 PM


What a nice touch on the roads we wander down.  This had the warmth of a cashmere sweater.  It looks awful nice, but the feel on our skin is so soft, keeping us warm inside.

And you are the lucky one to be wearing it!!  That's my take anyway.    

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9 posted 2001-11-07 12:00 PM


miasmic!



a heavy vaporous mi*as*ma (noun), plural -mas also -ma*ta

[New Latin, from Greek, defilement, from miainein to pollute]

First appeared 1665

1 : a vaporous exhalation formerly believed to cause disease; also : a heavy vaporous emanation or atmosphere

2 : an influence or atmosphere that tends to deplete or corrupt ; also : an atmosphere that obscures : FOG

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and i inhale every word,
the name of the author,
sunshine
on my
mind,
illuminating
the aura of the art,
haloed

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hehe... i LOVED this, sunshineyone..... i had to look up the miasmic word because i didn't know what it meant but if you need a name for this poem, that's what i'd call it....

if you need a name for YOU, well, geez, the name you already chose is perfect!!!
you bring light into the space between
the darkness, smiling your words upon us,
like dawn...

er, or something.... or other...
poetic is an adjective, right?
geesh, i'm into verbs

just trying to figure out how to do it
as beautifully as can be done.......

*smile*

you are Poet!!
you write so well so concisely
[dodo said rambling again]
geesh

all this to say...

I LOVED IT!!!!!!

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10 posted 2001-11-07 12:07 PM


Karilea--this just drifts to that place...where alone feels so right.  Wonderful writing!
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11 posted 2001-11-07 12:18 PM


Beautiful writing.
Peaches

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